That was actually quite the enjoyable read.

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I thought so too

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Thanks

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You're welcome!

Remember, Twilight, Twist is watching you masturbate

Well in not sure where this going either, but it seems promising. But for whom ;). *hands meatball sandwich*

What's going on. I'm confused. Why was she angry? Why was Pinkie acting weird? Am I missing something? Do I Even want to know?

This is....
Huh

An attic filled with dust and cobwebs, like the basement entrance to the princess.

Did you just...did you just say Twilight's snatch is like a dirty attic?

This was kind of a rambling, meandering mess that had no point and didn't really go anywhere.

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It will go somewhere. It's a prologue

4633237 Yes, but the function of a prologue is to hook the reader into the story. This failed on every conceivable level.

4633239
Sorry...

4633239 That's harsh. Sure, it's not perfect, but don't go trying to put down the author for it.

So when are you going to start the prologue? I mean usually you title the prologue, Prologue. Not chapter one means that it is not chapter one, but if you do not follow the rules for labeling it or make it desirable to keep reading, then you are just trol.... Oh I get it now...

Just kidding keep doing what you are doing...

Well, I read this ...

So, when you get a chance continue it please.