• Member Since 16th May, 2014
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Hey its that Pony


Just a Brony who enjoys a good story.

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Various Imperial forces have gone silent after a single report from a Blood Raven Marine. Inquisitor Saberland has arrived to investigate the strange event and encounters a force unlike any she had faced before.

She now stares into the smile of the madness of friendship.


This was just something I did some time back on a whim. I thought it would be good for a laugh or two. While I don't really have plans to do a lot of writing here I figured I should at least make the effort to add to the galleries if I'm going to be browsing.

Generally silly and full of references.

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Comments ( 14 )

You're being a grumpy little lemon.

4418498

Pardon? :rainbowhuh:

EDIT: Oh wait. Your trying to troll me. I get it now.

Well, thanks for the comment anyway!

I find the mature setting is not fitting, you can probably set it to teen.

4420655

Alright I'll go and change that then. I wasn't really sure so I thought to play it safe at first. Thanks for the feedback.

4420171

Yay Heresy. :yay:

4418498 If you're trying to troll me, I feel bad for you son. 'Cos I got 99 jimmies and your post rustled none!

Sorry mate, I had to say it...

4425164 (Ignore it and back away slowly, then we report it to my brothers... then fire.)

As a Thorian, I can live with this.
Now, where can I get one of those "Trixie" hats?

Yes, let the friendship flow through you. Soon, the god empresses shall rule this galaxy in a perpetual state of peace....Minus the big bad that comes out of nowhere, usually after an 1000 year banishment of course...Or corrupted followers...Or monsters...Okay, there might still be some problems, but they'll go away once you throw enough stuff at it.

4889107

"Ain't nuffin' we can't solve wiff enuff dakka! Tragedy iz, we'z nevah gonna have enuff dakka ta fix all da problems in da universe." :rainbowlaugh:


Aside from that, I thought the story was silly, but ended well. The "Recommend Immediate Exterminatus. No Extraction." bit really sold the whole "slow slide into madness punctuated by brief bouts of sanity". A good little tale that ends before it outstays its welcome. :twilightsmile:

6120746
Thank you. :twilightsmile:

That's pretty much exactly what I was going for. I'm glad you appreciate that last bit right at the end.

Da Big Mekintosh

I’m dead!

Honestly, we should be grateful the Blood Ravens didn't just "reclaim" the Elements of Harmony.

Delightful madness log. A shame it took me so long to find it.

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