Day 1: After Twilight Sparkle moves into her palace and begins seeing travelers about their friendship problems, she quickly realizes that she doesn't know as much about her Equestrian neighbors as she thought.
Day 2: Fluttershy's first day on the throne gives her the chance to pass some new laws to protect her animal friends, but they may have some unintended consequences for her pony friends.
I really like the story and cant wait to see what other funny guest come there to ask for help. I do have to ask why doesn't Spike get a day to rule. I mean there are 7 of them and he is a member of the court. We all also know that he is just as mature (if not most times more level headed then the girls.) It seems the tree give Spike more credit and attention then any of the others.... some friends lol.
That was a lot better than I thought it'd be. The humor was genuine, every pony felt in character (considering), and the plot has legs. Good job! Faved + 1.
Okay, wow, this is a cool concept. Some parts were pretty funny (the Diamond scene comes to mind), and I really like the idea here. So far, so good, and I look forward to seeing future chapters.
A very good lesson here, and well-executed, to boot.
Good story. I shall follow and see where this goes. (Btw, Cupcakes-like Pinkie Pie, hilarious.)
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Pinkie didn't actually kill anybody, I didn't even say what she really did at any point. Calm down.
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Also I'm sorry, but I am deleting your comment. Not because I'm trying to censor you, but because I don't feel it's necessary or appropriate to swear in the Review section of an E-rated My Little Pony story. For others, this was the review.
"Then you shouldn't have brought it up in the first place. The punchline relies on a meme that hasn't been funny since Moses parted the Red Sea and the whole joke (for lack of a better word) is in a dead heat with the "Lyra gets physically mutilated while absolutely nobody else reacts" for tastelessness. And even setting aside humor as a matter of differing personal tastes, there's no metric in existence that could match up either of them with the tone set by the rest of the fic. The first chapter had promise, but if this sort of jarringly dissonant cruelty-with-a-laugh-track (****) is even the slightest indication of what's to come, I'm (*******) out."
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So jokes about psychosis, murder and cannibalism are a-okay, but somebody breaks out an F-bomb and only then does it become think-of-the-children time?
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If someone hasn't read/been exposed to a certain fanfiction (which kids of that age shouldn't have been) then the reference in question is going to fly right over their heads. I don't know if you've noticed this about the show, but there are a lot of jokes that fly over the heads of the younger crowd. If you're unaware of that story Pinkie's last line is just her trying to bribe her way out of jail in a silly manner.
The only thing that might make kids think something's up about it are your Comments here. Thanks for that.
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Go back to those jokes. Write them down as you find them. Get them all together in one place, look at them collectively, determine the patterns into which they fall. Figure it out yourself, because I have neither the time nor the patience to tear up your self-centered ignorance.
Pinkie explicitly claims to have been imprisoned for killing another pony, a claim which is never contradicted or even questioned within the story. Just how oblivious do you think kids are?! Actually don't bother to answer that because I have given up trying to care.
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Pinkie Pie is known for saying lots of ridiculous things with little or no connection to reality. In this case she was acting overly tough because that's what you do in "prison" to avoid being picked on by other inmates (despite that those inmates are all her friends, the mind of Pinkie Pie works by its own rules). Nobody responded to it because they accepted it for Pinkie Pie "being Pinkie Pie".
I don't know what else to tell you here, you're reading far more into it than actually exists. Which is your right, go hold your opinion, but I continue to disagree with it.
Yep. Gone to her head.
I know.
It's colors are a bit dark.
I gotta agree, not your best move.
HEH!
Fair enough.
I however am, SHE TOLD YOU SO.
Well, Trees are alive, but, in the sense you mean, perhaps, semi sentient or psychic to a degree or something, why else would the 6 keys resemble your cutie marks?
Yeah, it was a nice touch in the part of DHX.
Care Mare. Why not.
Indeed.
At least she was able to try and calm down.
Daaaw.
A message for all Bronies and a damn good one.
Aye.
Uh, you OK there? And anyPONY.
That's really sweet.
Well then. That happened.
HEH!
Ah, a bad OC.
Er...
Wise move.
You would be.
HEH!
O, kay then.
That's, actually very nice.
VERY nice touch.
Because Spike is likable.
HEH!
How so?
No, she's just not omniscient.
*sigh*
She's right.
Wat.
Nope.
Ya had to ask?
You're kidding me.
What the?
Should, I prepare her funeral?
This is getting absurd-
Nope.
You're blasé about all this.
Blame that crazy mare who's convinced Fluttershy.
Oh yeah.
OK then, I'm just gonna go, this way. *runs*
Calm yourself. Also, wait what?
The f*ck?!
Wise move-
A lot.
Capital T. Also, there is a term I REALLY want to call her here, but for the sake of keeping this comment section civil, and not wanting to do anything stupid, I'll keep my mouth shut.
She IS the princess.
Toldja.
Arrest due to the Mane Cureall's crazy laws.
And if you weren't a lunatic, you might realize that they do have good sense.
I don't think that's been brought up, no.
No, you just made some mistakes, so does everyone.
See?
FINALLY!
Good idea.
This is a reference to that fic. No. Bad author, we do NOT reference THAT.
Daaw.
If you say so.