The year is 2359. Ponykind is on the brink of extinction, with the ruthless and merciless army named the Hexaband. Their last attack, the invasion of Exiumm, has left Ponykind on it's toes. A ship named the Dawn of Time escapes destruction, as it uses faster-than-light speed to escape the now dead planet.
Hexaband forces have followed the Dawn of Time, and have fired upon them. Lily, a KNIGHT-II Super Soldier escapes the Dawn on an escape pod, aiming for a ring world. Once they land, they begin to discover terrible secrets, and the dark intention of what the ring world actually is.
This. Is Halo: Equestrian Fall.
Chapters (3)
Is this a alternative dimension of Halo or the same one?
you just combinate my two favourit things.
ponies and Halo
,It looks like you've got more of a setup for a game than a story here. Though, your writing is fluent, and correct, so heck, what could go wrong?
While this is all good and interesting, I'm seeing a lot of rewriting here, just flopping some ponies on top of Bunjie, I just hope to see some originality in later chapters.
Yay. More of... this.
Wow that was long I can already see chaos.
I wish I can enjoy these stories as they are everywhere, problem is that I can't stand ponifications and that is bad because these stories are friggen everywhere.
4247538 Ah, tis the same, Distorted Flare.
Hmm... I see what a lot of you are saying. I have read over it myself, and have realised that maybe I should rewrite it. Maybe start something original? Actually, what I'll do, is finish this one, then start a completely original one. How's this sound?
4250154 I think the biggest problem is that good story but the context just feels wrong a prey species like ponies could not do what humanity did and not that early either. Spartans program began in 25 century. The problem is that if we compare ponies to humans currently we crush them in terms of technology and numbers. Hell some of them are still living in the wild west era with bray burn and so on. But all in all an enjoyable read.
4252415 Thank you for the compliment, good sir. But, as for the year, I tried not to copy the same year that Halo: CE used, thus moving it back. Or should I move it forward? I am asking because the opinion of my readers are important. Thank you
Is the story dead?
6358740 It was, but I am considering continuing it for lack of anything else to do.