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Superdale33


In reading, keep an open mind. In writing, have fun with words.

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See that title? That's me. Observer. Title equals main character, capiche? Just remember that I'm that one guy that jumps from Universe to Universe being a hero and stuff, like other dummies, except he enjoys it! 'He' being 'I', remember that, kiddies. The only downside is the pain. Which is quite plentiful. I think I'm rambling. I'm supposed to describe this adventure in particular! Let's see, I mess with six little ponies, two specific princesses, and two Wastelanders while saving the day. Sounds about right, and what more would anybody want!? More random characters, I guess, which there is! And maybe a plot that doesn't revolve around me. Blah. Well, at least things always turn out fine for everyone...

That hanging ellipses means nothing, ignore it. A mere typo.

To sum up, just know that things get pretty crazy. Not random crazy, that's just dumb. It's the the type of crazy where there's a story and a plot and emotional, serious bits and everything that makes a story. What's crazy about that? Me! But I'm not the crazy one, just my predicaments. Thought I should make that clear. Claritin clear.

Oh, and though this is crossing over with multiple Universes, knowledge of those Universes is not required. The author has given pictures! Isn’t that grand!? Every four year old's dream!

And finally look at this review!

Neat.

You can't get any better than that!

Alright, now for some credit to be handed out. Let’s start with that fancy picture on top. That’s by the author. But just look at it! Why is Fluttershy the only one with a shadow!? Why am I just a silhouette!? It doesn't make sense! Where's my agent!? Oh, right, I don't have one. Well, give him props for it.

Edited by this guy named Legion222, because Legion221 was taken. Well, not really. This guy just probably liked the number two... which was brought to you by Sesame Street some odd years ago.
Proofread by JoshuaGrahamPony and Rokkurin, two doofuses with too much time on their hands. Like, an absurd amount of time. It's crazy, like my predicaments, not me, memorize that!

And now for each and every vector in that image above… hold on to your butts:
Twilight Sparkle by Jeatz-Axl
Rarity by Givralix
Applejack by Bronyvectors
Fluttershy by Rubez2525
Rainbow Dash by DashiesPet
Pinkie Pie by MoongazePonies
Princess Luna by Chezne
Princess Celestia by tamalesyatole
And I, Observer, was found randomly on the internet, and photo shopped in mere minutes. Quality stuff right here, folks. Stick around.

And for those of you that are still reading, My Little Pony belongs to Hasbro, in case some nut thought I was the corporate CEO of the company. If I was, I'd make many a person happy with my epic stories of heroism. Oh yeah, and more ponies. Can't forget about them.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 22 )

The description is amazing. :rainbowlaugh:

This was quite refreshingly silly, and I look forward to seeing more of it at some point.

Write on,
Legion

Its true, I have too much time on my hands. For now at least.

4238554 I agree with yah on that one. :raritywink: The description was awesome and hilarious. :rainbowlaugh: Here's to Superdale and this story that will be sure to make everypony laugh. :twilightsmile: :yay:

Okay, I admit it, I do have too much time on my hands... because working is too mainstream.

(Insert appropriate meme here) Not bad : )

Yay for randomness! I have to wonder how many other universes you plan on adding before this is through XD.

Write on,
Legion

Well this updated. Awesome :twilightsmile:

Too bad I already read this while editing.

I'd forgotten how funny this story was :rainbowlaugh:

Glad to see this story back from the dead.

Also, 4872331
I know the feel.

Write on,
Legion

Can't wait to see Observer beat luna with his way with words

WOOHOO ISSAC FTW fucking ponies better not hurt him

Too many characters from different games, I'll just stick to Lost and Fallen.

5363510 Yep, and more is coming. This is more just for fun if I feel like typing for relaxation. Not for everyone.

Hahahaha! This chapter sure was hilarious! :rainbowlaugh: I do like the fact that Issac Clarke just showed up out of nowhere, not to mention the fact of how.

An armored person crashed onto the table, scattering all the plates and food. Everyone froze completely: the wastelanders with their hands on their helmets, Garrus with his mouth open and a piece of meat in his hand, and the ponies with their jaws completely dropped.

As for me, well, I was holding a piece of asparagus. I looked down to the vegetable in question, before turning back to the armored figure, groaning on the table. “I have magic powers…” I concluded, “Sweeeeeet.”

Still loving the Observer, because he reminds me of myself. Weird, kooky and completely random. Not just that, but because I pretty much busted out laughing when during this scene.

“How long do you think it’ll take?” Twilight questioned like she was asking about the weather, which was what she was thinking about asking as well.

Garrus faced Twilight, his face unmoving, “For Observer to get shot, or for Observer to get shot?”

Despite how dark the humor was, Twilight had to chuckle. These new characters were influencing how she viewed violence, and whether it was for the better or for the worst was yet to be seen.

“‘Ello!” the two heard from Observer, quickly followed by a shout of surprise and a gunshot. The two were unfazed as they glanced to each other knowingly as their previous humor was evaporated on the spot.

“That didn’t take long,” Twilight sighed, shaking her head. A few seconds later, they heard grunting, continually coming closer. They didn’t bother to investigate as they remained where they were. Just as they predicted in their minds, Observer came crawling around the corner of the pillar, pulling himself along with his arms with his legs completely limp.

“So how’d it go?” Garrus asked like he hadn’t heard a thing. Observer gave another grunt before flipping to his back, his arms spread to the side as he gave a breath of exhaustion.

“I feel the diplomatic process is beginning to break down,” he expressed, before flinching. “Also, I can’t feel my legs.”

:rainbowlaugh: Man oh man. Superdale, you have created quite a funny little adventure here, and I am loving it! :yay:

The Observer reminds me of The Doctor from Doctor Who. Was that what you were aiming for or did you just want a silly character?

6617255 I wanted a silly character. I've actually not watched any Doctor Who, but I do have a good idea of the show. I'm trying to make sure not to take too much from the Doctor.

IT'S AALLLIIIIIIVVVVEEEEE :pinkiegasp::pinkiesad2:

6625616
2 years ago it was

I find Observer very relatable. If I had the power to travel through dimensions, I don’t doubt something similar would occur.

Please continue the story.

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