Getting What You Wanted

The light from her bedroom window shone directly on her closed eyes. She gave a grunt of annoyance and made to turn over in her bed for another bout of sleep when the fog retreated from her mind. She stretched herself out to the melodious cracking of bones, and gave a good look at her wings. She deftly preened three errant feathers then flew gently over to her night table.

She opened the drawer and produced the letter she had received in yesterday's mail. It was still there and she was not dreaming. A space had unexpectedly opened up on the main wonderbolt's squad and she was supposed to quietly, and without telling any other pony, head over to Spitfire's private office for her induction.

She brushed her teeth then gave her feathers yet one more glance before flying down to the front door. Soarin was sitting on the cloud platform just outside her door. It was obvious that he had not preened and from the look of him, it was very likely that he had been out there all night.

"You look terrible," stated Dash. She quickly re-assessed the situation and added, "Sir, I am sorry if I..."

"No, that's all right," interrupted Soarin. "I do look terrible."

"I still have a couple of slices left of one of AJ's apple pies, if you want some," said Dash.

"I am fine," said Soarin. "Well, I am not fine, but I am resolute. I did a lot of thinking since the Equestria Games tryouts, Dash, and I think you deserve to know a few things."

Soarin took a deep sigh. "Spitfire forced me into retirement. There is going to be a lot of press coverage and all of that, and Spitfire would...well what can she really do now anyway?"

Rainbow hugged the ex-wonderbolt, and quietly whispered, "That is just wrong. You were one of the foundations of the team." Her voice became louder as she pulled out of the embrace. "How can she do that to you?"

"That is the thing," replied Soarin. "When we were both Lieutenants in the bolts, we were great friends, but ever since she became captain she has become...distant, cold, and more than a little hungry. I couldn't see her doing this three years ago."

He paused for a while then added, "She has been watching you closely since the young flier's competition, and you have been top of the list for two years."

"Really?" said Dash as she pumped herself up for a second then came back down to reality. "It is still wrong though. I c-could wait a year and give you some time?"

"No, Dash," said Soarin. "The decision has already been made, and I am an up and coming has-been. Stupid signings and events. And yes I am not as swift as I used to be, but I am still better than the average team member. There is no way to appeal her decision."

"I guess the main thing I wanted to say is that it is not worth it," said Soarin. "If you think what Lightning Dust did to you as lead pony was bad, Spitfire is on a completely different cloud. She will use you up and throw you out, and Celestia help you if you get seriously injured. You have it good here in Ponyville."

Dash simply stared slack-jawed at Soarin. After an uncomfortable several minutes, she said, "I-I am tough enough. And if she pushes beyond reason, I could always quit, right?"

Soarin shook his head. "The contracts are pretty iron-clad. You would essentially have to get Spitfire to discharge you, and she wouldn't do that so long as she saw your potential benefit to the team."

"Well, if she wants me that badly, maybe I can have a better contract, or a hoof-shake," replied Dash.

"You are free to try, but I doubt she will budge on that issue," replied Soarin.

"And I also have a lot on my mind to tell Spitfire," pondered Dash out loud. "Some things that she might not enjoy hearing but thoughts that need to be aired."

Dash noted the sun's position in the sky, and seeing that she was risking being late, said her farewells to Soarin.

For his part, Soarin just sighed and dropped down into the town. Ponyville was a good town in which to put down roots.

Dash simply flew in a straight line to the wonderbolt's encampment in Cloudsdale. The normal tricks she would do on the way left undone as she deeply thought on what she would say to Spitfire. What was to be the best day of her life was reduced to a complicated set of feelings that even she couldn't adequately relate.

She nodded to Fleetfoot as she entered the encampment. Fleetfoot saluted in return before falling into formation behind her.

She navigated the maze of corridors to Spitfire's private office. Ancient and precious wonderbolt artifacts were proudly displayed on every wall. Spitfire stood up from behind an ornate mahogany desk and lifted a letter with her wing.

Dash swallowed and hoped her nervousness was not showing as she blasted out, "How dare you do what you did to Soarin. We both know he had several years left in him and he is the heart of the wonderbolts. Ma'am."

"You were always one for overt displays of emotion, Dash," said Spitfire, "but I think after you have read what I wrote in this letter, you will come around."

"Yes, I am also retiring," said Spitfire. "It will be a bold new era of the wonderbolts with you as the new captain. All we need is your signature on the line and it will all be set."

Rainbow Dash shivered as she held the page that felt like holding onto a stormcloud. She walked it over to the desk and grabbed the quill. She signed her name to the paper.

Almost immediately afterward she felt a burst of pain as the changeling that was posing as Fleetfoot sunk her fangs into Rainbow's neck.

She felt woozy as she turned back towards Spitfire.

"A changeling has always been captain of the wonderbolts," were the last words she heard.

Author's Note:

My first foray into the darkness, written while suffering from the flu and a low-grade fever.

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Onlyicanhear

Onlyicanhear #1 · Apr 13th, 2014 · · ·

Too short to have a real opinion on this, but i liked what i read till now

Fluttercheer

Fluttercheer #2 · Apr 18th, 2014 · 1 · ·

It's an interesting story, with a very unexpected ending. But unfortunately, the fever you had while writing influenced it, since there are some things that doesn't seem to fit:

First, why did Spitfire retiring Soarin before she retired? Where is the point for the story of that?
Also, is Soarin a changeling too? If not, why? How can it then be that he is not a changeling, despite the other Wonderbolts are?
Second, why did Spitfire even retire and why was she so eager to make Rainbow Dash the captain?
And third, why did Spitfire so explicitly say at the end that the captain of the Wonderbolts is always a changeling, despite that all Wonderbolts are changelings?

These are things that should be fleshed out better.

Maybe you give this fanfiction a rewrite one day?
It has potential, but being written with fever makes it very flawed and the idea shouldn't be wasted.

silvadel

silvadel #3 · Apr 18th, 2014 · · ·

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If Spitfire hadn't forced Soarin into retiring before retiring then Soarin would have been the head of the Wonderbolts. The whole idea of it for Spitfire was to have a new and long lived as captain, captain of the wonderbolts. She could play Dash for a good 15 years while she only had maybe 3 left for Spitfire.

What Spitfire needed was Dash's LEGITIMATE signature on the dotted line before impersonating her.

As for all of the wonderbolts? No. Only Spitfire and Fleetfoot are changelings.

(and my other option writingwise was to do work on DPGCMC -- which going by the reactions to this I am glad I didn't do. In essence I felt like writing or at least didn't feel like doing anything else and needed to be distracted so this happened. As for re-writing, the ship has sailed. You can't really resubmit so it would only be for a very small number of people who found this whenever and did not find it when it started. I am content to have it buried. It provided experience regardless, and it is not like I am low on ideas.)

Fluttercheer

Fluttercheer #4 · Apr 26th, 2014 · · ·

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Oh, so she isn't turning Rainbow Dash into a changeling too, but just killing her?
I got that wrong.
But what I still don't understand is, why she hasn't continued impersonating Spitfire?
Because her contract with the Wonderbolts as Spitfire was over?

goaway

goaway #5 · Jul 18th, 2014 · · ·

Interesting one, this.

silvadel

silvadel #6 · Jul 18th, 2014 · · ·

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I thought so... This one was written while I had a fever with the flu. I just felt like writing something anyway. Glad you enjoyed it. My main story DPGCMC is finally going to be getting a new chapter really soon.

SilverStar7

SilverStar7 #7 · Dec 10th, 2014 · · ·

I must say - I couldn't see that ending coming.

As a short one-shot it's pretty interesting. If this were longer, it could have a more developed plot and the motivations behind the various characters would be more well-known.

Dainn