Soarin' can get into a lot of random situations. Whether it can be eating too many pies, joking on his friends, hanging around Spitfire. It is endless.
But perhaps he can get into something beyond what he could imagine, something that goes beyond his Wonderbolt career, his military rank, his friends, his family, the mare he loves.
And that 'something' could be close to him, too close to him when it might appear staring at him at his bedside when he's asleep in the middle of the night, and it doesn't look to resemble pony. But this anomaly also appears to be lurking within his family.
Everything will soon change...
Getting bored and doing nothing is really the worst thing in life. software patents
oh damn
Damn those cliffhangers
But, this is very intresting.
I like where its goin'.
Please write more
Was that a pyro?
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Lol. No
hahaha this story already freaks the shit outta me
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Haha! How does it scare you?
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Well for one, I was reading this at 5 in the morning in pitch dark, laying in my bed. I have an imagination. also it reminds me of the movie Dark Skies. [u should watch it]
oh my god..... this story is soo creepy. like the greys....seriously u need to watch...crap..i forgot wut its called
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"Dark Skies", I believe?
3099663 yessshhhhhh!!!!! watch it!!!! unless uve seen it and got the story idea from that... lol.
Dead birds!!
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I haven't seen it.... Unfortunately. But I have seen other things that influence the creepy scenes in the story.
Nice Chapter! Also, I hope for you that this story will have a happyend ;) ...
Ancient Ailens reference.
Ugh.... whats that accident called... Roswell!
It just gotta be a reference to the Roswell accident.
Phenoix Lights.
Tell meh if i missed any other references
... You're ending up scaring me :O!
As I said on your other chapter, please make a happyending !
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I wonder how many people are scared by this story?
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Well done...
this story gives me creeps. but AWESOME
* Squeal!!!! Hides under Rainbow's covers and cries* IM SOOO SCARED!!! Ooh pie! - runs to pie and eats it then turns around- AHH SKY DEMON AND A TALL CREATURE!!!!! Dun dun dun.
- Shivers - I-I'm scared!!!!!! Mommy!!!!!!!!!!! Come here!!!! - tall figure comes in instead of mom - Crap....... I'm so dead... :(]
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Take it easy! Don't worry it will soon be okay... Maybe.
Wait.. I just reread this.. Is there maybe a reference to a cockatrice/basilisk? (Aurora sees the creature in a mirror-like object)
Damn creepy! Seriously, how can I get shuteye now ? Other than that, awesome chapter.
And you better make this a happyendingstory !
(By the way... What the hell happened in soarins room (rd:"tell nobody about this)?)
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And what happens if I don't make this a happy ending? Lawl.
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Then... Then, you're SO. DEAD. !
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Okay...
Hmm....
A little over 5000 words took only 7 minutes to read....
I read to much
Hey, I think this story is just fine but I think it is starting to get alittle bit weird. (my pov) :P
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Nice, but the others are getting too creeped out.
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Yeah, now that I had the chance to read this while im actually awake, yeah I am getting creeped out with the... Things. */)~.~(\*
(it was 3 in the morning when I read it the first time through, so yeah i was tired*sorry*)
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Lol. Just like everyone else.
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Lol.. Hehe, y-yeah,, hey D3rp Derp550? I have real question for you. (please pm me)
Eeyup, the end was... weird :derpyconfused:! But nice chapter!
Nice Chapter! Soo... Those tall things are humans *confused*?
Are the shadowbolds good or bad? Those talls things, are they good or bad? How will it end, what will happen to aurora, rainbow and soarin? Argh, so many questions o=!
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Aren't we all full of questions? But answers will come to the questions you have...
Hurry and make a new chapter before I explode
Why is chapter 7 password locked?
I'm Scared
Man I'm not scared *Feels something touch him* AHHHHH
Great Start!!
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Hey Thanks!
3626806 Just trying to be nice
I just seen this update cuz for some reason didnt show up on unread...
I guss it was a bad idea that Aurora didnt go with her mom
I swear I have heard that name before...
I kinda wanna know what happened in Soarin's room as well ... ?
pleas pleas pleas update this story its so so so so so soooooooooooooooooooo good
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i think it was the name of a cat in the warrior cats book's
4587871 Yes. It is the name of the leader of Thunder Clan to be exact. I've started to read tbe books... xD
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i never get around to reading them
4590535 How come? You really should give em a try