Fluttershy is best pony. Your arguement is invalid.
Mac wants to spend every moment with his fiancée, Fluttershy. But when he finds her in trouble, he wants to help. But the kind of help she needs isn't one he's used to...
Teen for Sexual Suggestions.
Here is the sequel: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/179959/big-news
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And they weren't even warmed up yet.......on Round 30.
2 weeks more 2 weeks less, it doesn't matter, she is your fiance and you got a job to do
That was adorable!
Funny...wasn't actually going to post it. Just came up with the idea and wrote and thought, "Maybe I should post this?"
Too bad, Angel...
Oh, Fluttershy... You're so cute!
I'll wager that Big Mac and Fluttershy are now gonna have a baby.
4175152 thanks for the positive feedback! I might make a small addition = Fluttershy finding out she's pregnant, announcing it to Mac, and maybe her going through all of it. Maybe...maybe. Depending on what the audience thinks
4175266 That would be ADORABLE!!!
4175841 thanks! I'll get working on it
4177305 Awesome!
The literal thing wrong with this is the formatting, which needs some work (like double spacing and starting a new paragraph whenever a new person speaks), but asides from that, it made me smile
Mackie is a cringeworthy pet name. Decent story though.
No critic here.
Some grammars mistakes, but nothing more.
Well...
Good work
, you made your homecountry proud.4223132 why is home country crossed out?
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BECAUSE MOTHER RUSSIA BUY A LOT OF POTTATOS AND TELL ME THAT I DONT HAVE TO PUT THAT!
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I KNOW THAT DONT MAKE SENSE
MOTHER RUSSIA IS UNPROUD OF MY
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Okay... Well I'm not from Russia so now I get it. 'MERICA!
4243702 funny. But I'm afraid I'm not confident nor comfortable in any sexual writing
4244074 I dont mind if your're not comfy with writing stuff like that but oh well i can just imagine...... MAYBE MY FIRST BOOK CAN BE ON THAT MOMENT
4249009 kind of interesting in that book... *devious smile*
4249098 Very interesting *stare dad face*
This fic could never happen. Wanna know why? Mac only said Eeyup ONCE! That is not the correct amount if he is going to speak more than once.
...But it is still a good fic. Have a like.
daw
4258578 ha! Funny. The sequel, Big News, it out. He talks more but he still says Eeyup
4258800 It has it's flaws, but is still good writing and character development. I was never really interested in FutterShy x Mac until this fic.
4258844 Good to know I got you aboard the S.S. FlutterMac! The ship that never sinks!
Duet you would say yes but I jut want to know if it is ok if I do a cobnashin of your two story's heat and big news all the creat it go to you I will just take your story's and put all of them together with a vary little tikes but it will not even be notes a bull but if you say no I fine with that
Ps - More of a tribeut to you
Everything was cute and well written...but you have all that lovely build up and chicken out right at the pay out! So unsatisfying :(
Lovely.
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