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StormHoof32
A writer who enjoys putting a smile on peoples faces. If a story makes you smile, I've done my job. :)
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You are right, there aren't enough Redheart fics on this site, good to see a new one. Will be looking forward to the continuation of this story.
i like it but i dislike fics that have more than 1 human in equistria lol not sure y but good story
4057541 There are other humans there, but right now, Dylan is the only one who decided to stay in Ponyville. I don't plan on having any other interactions with other humans other than the occasional request for Rarity to make an outfit.
Oh~ this looks interesting, and ill be giving this a read!
well in that case keep it coming my eyes a twitching
Top 5 Xenophiliacs of all time.
1.Dylan.
2.Dylan
3.Dylan 4.Dylan and 5. Dylan.
Cuz he spits hot fire!
There's a few spelling errors in there, but other than that it's a pretty good start.
Redheart is hot!
I agree on the fact that there isn't enough redheart fics but,
why is everything rushed?
with what you wrote I could easily expand it 7 chapiters!
4057931 Because, I have a plan. You will have to wait and see. As will I considering I have no idea if this plan will work or not
4058334 I hope it'll be good, because 3/4 of the fics who fit one year and a litte more in one small chapter are bad, heavily rushed and imposible to understand.
you earned a curiosity fave, my good sir.
4058404 this chapter was mainly to show how Dylan got to Equestria. Like a Prologue. I'll pm you some details right now.
4058404 Indeed. Tentatively favorited pending further developements.
Ok finally started reading this! For first impressions this was decent definitely has problems no doubt but it was decent.
There were a couple grammatical errors, and some characterization was off particularly for fluttershy.
It erked me when you placed dylan as a vegetarian not for the fact that he is a vegetarian but for the fact it feels tacked on like you yourself believe fluttershy would outright assume and not take kindly to any sapient carnivores/omnivores.
Fluttershy knows and understands the circle of life she understands that some beings need meat for nutrition and she does give meat to animals such as fish to otters in one instance and shes a lover of all animals so I don't think dylan should have been a vegetarian to appease fluttershy.
Now for the gateway appearing near the capital the scene you painted felt like people came and rushed around it to see what it was with military accompanying them if such a thing happened the military personnel would deny any close access to the scene let alone letting it be viewed on the news. That area would be on strict lockdown no access until they knew what was going to happen.
I'm sure theres a bit more but I can't think on anything else I enjoyed this but hopefully the romance isn't rushed and try to put in in the perspective of someone actually falling in love not these three days later romances.
This has potential and I'm rooting for you.
You're off to a great start dude!
4072796 I will be drawing this out. i want it to be a: he loves her but she doesn't share the same feelings yet kind of thing.
4074442 Ah sounds painful.
Heres to a potentially good story then.
Gotta love a good Earth/Equestria story! And this is looking like a great one! Can'twait to read more
!
There are a few misspelled words here and there but nothing all that bad. Nice reason for him ending up in the hospital. Though, I will say, a lot of stories involve a manticore attack to send them to the hospital.
Not that I really care, here's to a hopefully good story.
Have fun writing this, I'll make sure to keep up with its progress.
My HIE fic? Almost everybody hates the main character for being a human. >:)
Look at 29th paragraph
Her eyes not Here eyes !
4602380 thx
I enjoyed this. You have my permission to continue, mortal. I look forward to your progress. (Fav)
4700891 Thx man. Im not sure when i'll get the next chapter up, considering all the work im dealing with in the army, that and the other stories I'm still working on, but I will try to get another out at some point.
This story is decent, I like the idea of a Nure Redheart shipping but it seems a little rushed.
Other than that please continue.
5226133 Sorry but it will be a while before I update this. got a lot on my plate at the moment.