Thehiddenclopper
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nice and lovely
The only thing bad about it was that it was too short, which contributes to somewhat of a fast pacing. I feel like I'm on partial fast-forward.
Which is never good.
If Spike were to walk in at that moment...
Anyways, a good one one shot. I'd like to see more
Short, but pretty good.
-Glassed
Short and sweet, I like it
Shortest foreplay ever!
The clop scene was way too short. Hit the bed, fingers inside, mount up, finished. I know if I had Rarity in bed, I'd want to take some time to explore her body, and that doesn't mean just the sexy parts.
The shift from making out on the couch to having a pillowfight was abrupt even for getting blindsided by a cushion. You could have used some dialogue there.
And no, I'm not going to shut up and clop.
Short, but to the point. Very good!
way too short.. but all in all very nice story.. i could see myself reading more..
the setting (rarity finding you in the middle of nowhere while looking for something and you starting to date her after three month) reminds me a bit of Sophistication & Betrayal.. i effing loved it there.. and i do here
whatever becomes of this.. nice work
What a quick shot, so disapointing.
That was BRILLIANT
Short but very well written!