What would you do if you suddenly woke up in the body of one of the CMC? When a writer wakes up as Sweetie Belle's double , yet still in his normal bedroom, he needs to rely on the same little sister that he had neglected for years, along with a mischievous little draconequus who intends to use Sweetie as her personal plaything. Worse yet, a great evil looms on the horizon, and the young unicorn must now figure how to return to her true form… and perhaps even save the world along the way.
This story is a sequel to Dodo!
(A project written in collaboration with Pinklestia and Alos88)
[ Cover art by the amazingly talented TheGreekOwl ]
Chapters (3)
LOV WRONG BOOK
I don't know when this story was uploaded. But its got a twist in a story I have never seen before. Keep up the great work you three!!
I don't know when this story was uploaded. But its got a twist in a story I have never seen before. Keep up the great work you three!!
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Remember to read Dodo! so the story makes more sense.
4153963 I read that first
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Fixed, also working in chapter 3.
Welcome back to writing..... I skimmed through some of it, but seeing as its 1:40 am at the time of this post... I'm a bit tired after a 13 hour work shift so.... Yeah ill reread tomorrow
Is there an apple bloom or a babs seed version, where Sweetie belle and scootaloo help unite the Crusaders, and maybe explore the lives of the fillies as they attend school, interact with their families, etc in Equestria or on earth?
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Applebloom does have her own story in the sequel. ECMC season one was made to be four parts. This is part two.
I just read the story and I have to say it's pretty good. I like the plot of the story and the ambivalence the main character has been feeling throughout the story. The only cripe I have with the story is the dialogue. It's not particular bad or anything but it seems to never end at times. Space it out by adding descriptions so the readers can visualize the situation more, and in turn be even more engrossed in the story. It's just distracts me from the story when their is no action going on. But good job otherwise.
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Well the main problem was that Alos88 disappeared, hence why this story has not been continued-
5797499 I hate it when you're trying to work with someone over the internet and the for some reason they just disappear for a while... I've experienced it a few times myself. I have too much stuff to do in school nowadays that I don't have time to do much else, so it's not much of a problem for me anymore seeing as I don't have the time to commit to joint/collaboration projects. Though it is kind of fun to do, especially when using teamviewer and trying to figure out what to write down or what animation to use in the video editing or et cetera. Hope he returns soon :/
These chapters are too long!
can you break them up to 2,000 words per chapter please?