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Eathlome


Tai 'dovienya ain al'alantin a Moridin

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"Betrayal, betrayal and abandonment. Is that all that awaits me? I only want to help..."
When the elements of Harmony cleansed Nightmare Moon, changing her back to Luna, what were they truly doing? The being that fused with Luna has existed far longer than anything else, created with the beginning of existence. Alone for eons, it desperately tries to fulfill its one wish, by helping others achieve theirs. But things always turn out bad, the ones it helps leave it behind or exploit it. It can barely survive now, losing much of it's power to protect the one it was helping, only to be abandoned in it's time of need.


For ten years Apex has been on the run, protecting his parent's life's work, after they were murdered. Turned into a monster in order to protect himself and fulfill his parent's wishes, Apex has been alone. Wishing for another who would accept him, not for what he looks like, but for who he is.


When two hearts cry out for each other, yet without knowing, fate will bend, and worlds will meet. And if one is brave enough to grasp this opportunity, then miracles can happen.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 28 )

Highly descriptive and well thought out. If it was allowed, I think that this could turn into a very successful novel. :twilightsmile:

It gets annoying with how many "humans are evil/humans are parasites/humans are stupid" stories there are out there, but you show promiss with this one.

Just... one thing though. Before you get too into the "Humans need to be exterminated" thinking, conisder that the human race, with all it's flaws and problems, is a student that's trying to learn about the universe without a teacher.:trixieshiftright:

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... deep, very deep.
Also, are you a time traveler?

Tai 'dovienya ain Ma'alantin a Moridin

370495 Nope. No time jumping, just non-lateral thinking.

And that Old Tongue is throwing me off. All I'm getting of it is "True Luck is (something) of Death"

Of course, I'm just going at it as individual words...

374729 sorry I meant to put
Tai 'dovienya ain al'alantin a Moridin
also al'alantin is two different words.

383069Hmm...

'True Luck is the Brother of Death'...

This one needs to go with some thought.

I really like the premise of this. Looking forward to more

Boring, but acceptably so.

That is all.

I liked it and i think they were spot on.

I'm currently imagining how this beat down would play out. Biggest threat to Apex I can think of would be the Stare, but that ability seems to need a psychological pathway in, like with the dragon, it'd probably when she threatened to tell his mother (no matter how old you are, if the people standing over you can make you feel small themselves, once the mother card is brought out you'll do anything to insure she never finds out). She tried that with Apex, all I'm seeing is "My mother would be very proud of me. *Flick to the nose which sends her flying back*":fluttercry:

If he can keep her on defensive, I can see him overcoming Twilight's magic as well. He's assaulting her with fangs and claws without break, so she needs to bring up a magic bubble. He wraps his arms around it, physically squeezing it smaller before picking it up, with her in it, and using the Twilight Bowling ball on her 5 pin friends.:twilightangry2:

Rainbow is fast. Apex is THE top predator. I'm sure there's an evolution somewhere that deals with fast moving prey.:rainbowderp:

Applejack is already taken care of.:ajbemused:

Pinkie has random on her side. You can't predict for random, so nothing says she couldn't beat him.:pinkiehappy:

Rarity... maybe she could- nah... well then maybe- nah... then how about- wouldn't work... Seems like she'd be pretty useless here.:raritycry:dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_Sparkle.png

PLZPLZPLZPLZPLZ MOAR UPDATES!!!!!

I r srs, K? But really, this story is a welcome breath of fresh air, so try and update it more often, please?:fluttershysad:

If that's okay with you...:fluttershbad:

-Jorofrarie

Also a good story, but, I do say I'm more liking Young Gods better. I like comedies over sad stories.

this is really good and im am looking forward to the next chapter. and the one after that and th one after that and so on until atleast chapter 50. only when you get to 50 chapters or more will i allow you to try and end it....but only if theres also a sequal. thats how much i like your fic. keep up the good work and im really looking forward to the next lot of chapters.

Isnt horror the same as fear?:ajbemused:

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They are similar, but slightly different. Horror is a feeling of revulsion, the realization that something terrible has just been witnessed. Fear is more related to the dread that is felt before something occurs, similar anxiousness and nervousness. The revulsion felt in horror is not necessary in fear.
I hope that this answered your question.

~Eathlome

2500187 hmmm. Gracias senior :-)

Yasssssss i like this story

To the Author, your doing fantastic. I see no issues at all as of this current date. This is a very different HIE story, and this is a very good thing. HIE stories can be cookie cutter and somewhat generic.

I truly look forward to more.

One minor issue. Doge

How was it able to doge Rainbow Dash?'

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Tibia-nest, that pun was quite Sans-sational!

My intrest has been caught

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