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AvalonAva


Hello, readers, I'm Avalon. Being a semi-successful FanFiction writer made me decided to bring my pony stories onto here, so that I can widen my audience. So read, and please, enjoy.

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My name is Carrie Hatfield.

Three days ago, Professor Sanative Averys applied an experimental metabolic simulator to a curious case in which the colt in question had lost their appetite, spanning over two weeks. He went from starved to ravenous. He lost control, and unspeakable horrors ensued. I locked them away, but I was unable from stopping the Royal Guards from releasing them. Then the true horror began.

My god, what have we done?

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Comments ( 15 )

Cool, it reminds me a bit of HP Lovecraft's "Herbert West - Re-animator"...

4039217 I feel like I should know that, but I don't.

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Here it is. Despite Lovecraft's opinion, it's still quite good.

4043184 I actually want to read those. I find that reading fiction from different spectrums and authors helps in perfecting my own writing, sort of like learning from others.

As she said this, Rarity raised her left foreleg. A nasty bite mark showed through her fur.

I'd shoot her, just in case... :raritycry: And I'd watch out for Berry Punch, she may respawn if one pours alcohol on her body...

Carrie begun to walk towards the door when twilight raised one of her wings and stopped her.

There's a missing capitalisation here.

4076625 Her name is always hard to catch the capitalization error.

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Yeah, especially when you use both Twilight and twilight (I often have it the other way round: I capitalise "scratch" and "chase" often, even when I don't mean Vinyl or Cloudchaser...)

4076634 Also when you get really into writing a story. In the heat of things, a lot of grammatical and spelling errors occur. I am not exempt from that fact.

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Yeah. And then I re-read 10k words I wrote and I look like this - :facehoof:

Whooo! Marshmallow pony is going to be decapitated!

Also.. Why does Fluttershy always forget she has wings? Wings > Zombies

4078837 I did think about using them...but I figured in her panic she'd forget. :twilightsheepish:

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She does tend to forget them, that is so.

And man, the Pegasi are going to have an easy time in this zombie apocalypse. Just fly away and rain death from above. Unicorns should do well too.

Earth ponies are fucked.

Spike, on the other hand, should do just fine. "Gnaw a little harder, those scales are kinda itchy".

Only read description. Why are there human names with no Human tag?

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