The Demon lord of Equestria

by Ninetails

Burning bridges

Author's Note:

Sorry for the delay but figuring out how to end this chapter was a bitch. In the end I went for a lead in to the next chapter. Have fun.

I sat in the courtyard near the main gate with the guards who were going to dispatched to deal with the threat that was recently revealed. I sat to the rear of the group simply because I was taller and wanted a bit of space for my tails. I could see the guards around me were concerned about having me acompany them. It irked me but I did understand where they were coming from. The the captain of the operation arrived and stood upon the little makeshift stand that had been made for the briefing.

“Alright listen up. We are going to be deployed to Ponyville in order to protect them from the Ursa Major threat. I know many of you have never seen an Ursa let alone faced one in battle but take heart. They may bigger than us and stronger than us but we are smarter than them. They cannot plan.” He gave his speech as he pace back and forth. I could see it was having the desired effect on the gathered bodies present. Even I had to admit it was a little inspirational. After the briefing the captain took me aside to ask a question.

“Look I personally don't care who or what you are, however my soldiers are a little antsy about your coming with us, I was wondering if you could do something about that. I don't like my soldiers nervous.” I placed a paw on my chin in thought. 'What he says is true, and I don't want to cause problems. What can I do?' Change your form. 'What? Who keeps saying that? Also how do I do that?' Simply focus on your desired form and you will change into it. It was getting kinda creepy how this strange voice had all these answers. The only reason I wasn't completely freaking out over it was that it didn't seem to try to influence my decisions. It only seemed to give me advice on my abilities. Like an instinct given a voice. 'Maybe its a piece of my past that is still with me'.

After musing on that for a few seconds I decided to try shifting my form into something less obtrusive. I thought about becoming a smaller one tailed fox. As I concentrated I felt myself shrink. I opened my eyes to the captain looking at me his jaw on the floor.

“Wow.” Was the extent of his vocabulary at that moment. I let out a small chuckle.

“I do hope this will be satisfactory captain. I don't really know what else I can do.” 'Maybe shape shift into one of the guard. But then they would notice I'm not there. No that wouldn't work'.

“Y-yes I believe that will work.” He stammered as surprised as I was with my new found ability.

A few hours later me and the guards arrived at Ponyville without incident. We went into the town and greeted the various ponies that called it home. A few questions about me arose but the captain dismissed them by calling me an “adviser”. I almost laughed at that. Me a demon that has no memory before I awoke in a clearing an “adviser”. Still it made sense to say. I sighed inwardly. Why am I even here? Not being able to answer that question I simply let it slide.

Hours later night had fallen upon us. I had hoped for a quiet uneventful night. Alas it seems fate said “fuck you”. This particular fuck you came in the form of a massive purple star bear tearing out of the forest and smashing directly into the town. I ran from my post to see it. This thing was big...no it was beyond huge. The guards were trying and failing to contain it. I decided to try my luck and delivered a slash to the creatures eye. It responded by roaring and charging me. Aw crap. I attempted to dodge however the massive bear was simply too big. The resulting slap sent me through an entire building.

Anger filled me as I rose. HOW DARE YOU! How dare you attack me you pathetic creature! I charged the beast summoning a ball of flame by drawing a infinity symbol. I followed this up with a spiral that summoned a gust of wind pushing the ball of flame at the massive bear. It collided but didn't have the desired effect at all. My attack only served to enrage the creature further. It rampaged at me once again however this time I was ready.

Darkness swirled around me as I released my disguise and revealed my true form. My tails lashed around in anticipation of the pain I was going to inflict upon my foe. I heard some unintelligible screams off to my sides. I paid them no mind as I was far too focused on my prey. The world turned gray and my tails began to draw furiously. When I had finished a torrent of the elements was unleashed. Lightning danced from the sky. Fire danced and burned. Ice pierced and melted. Rain attempted to douse the flames but was fought by the wind which only served to fan them. The ursa roared in pain as nature itself heeded my call to kill it. After what felt like an eternity it finally fell.

As tiring as it was to go all out like that I one more thing I needed to do. I readied nine-strike as I approached the beast. It looked up at me with a look. I guess it was trying to beg for its life. It was short lived as I brought my blade down and removed its head. The beasts blood went everywhere. After the thing was felled I took stock of the surrounding area. The village was gone. My fury and power had leveled the whole thing. A few small fires danced. I called forth a rainstorm to put out the fire.

After dousing the flames I began to look around. The village was reduced to little more than rubble. I couldn’t see a single survivor. Making my way through the rubble and carnage I came upon many bodies. Some mangled by fire and debris that you wouldn’t recognize them. Others looked like they had simply fallen asleep. I wandered through the carnage thinking about the loss of life. It was all my fault. Yet I felt no guilt. I was saddened by the loss of life. Yet I did not feel the guilt I would have associated with such an action. Before I could think upon this any further a voice I had hoped to not hear spoke up from behind me.

“What happened here?” It almost cracked and lost its regal sound but in the end it held firm.

Comments

[SeventhBrony]

“What happened here?” It almost cracked and lost its regal sound but in the end it held firm.

A COMPLETE idiot put a more or less peaceful demon in a situation where its blood would awaken know those you are about to send them to fight BEFORE you send them off to fight but then again this IS the mare that puts Shining Armor in the lead guard position when his main qualifications are as follows:
Being Twilight's brother and Caddie's boyfriend I rest my case

[Ninetails]

4520691 eh she isn't aware of the whole demon thing yet. Also Shining was able to hol an impressive shield for quite a while when his strength was being drained. Still no reason for him to be captain but hey.

[shadesofbrony]

That was rather short lived. When you mentioned an Ursa, I was expecting a battle of giants, where the two would duke it out and cause massive amounts of collateral damage. Instead it was just... BAM! dead Ursa, with a decimated village on the side. I'm slightly disappointed.

[Ninetails]

4523596 heh well I never intended the Ursa to be a major threat. It was simply strong enough to anger him but not so much an epic fight would happen. The upcoming battle with the two sisters on the other hand. That fight will be a majority of the chapter.

[Texus]

4523622 I am ok with it, well i was suprised about his final Attack, because i can´t remember if it is an regular Attack or something you came up with for the story. I haven´t see that coming, that he killed half of the village if i understand it right, but why not it only help the story to earn her Dark tag i suppose.

I can´t really say why, but i really want that he, i mean if he maybe enslave the ponies, that he get himself a few servants. A few of them could fear him and maybe he get on or two really bad psychos who love to do what he have in mind.

Hmm the story somehow don´t get boring for me. I read a few storys till now, and even if they are written really good only a few earned my....let say second and true like.

[Ninetails]

4525583 HALF pffffffffffffffffft hahahahahhahah. No he killed the WHOLE village. He isn't trying to get slaves or kill ponies. His anger simply got the better of him and he unleashed his full power without considering the collateral. Also I am glad you enjoy my story so much.

[Texus]

4525832 well that´s probably why i always try to sneak in ideas.^^
I really enjoy it, and it seems like i can´t stop saying it.
Ok i thought probably that it would maybe even darker if someone has to suffer a while.
I let you suprise me, i don´t read many Dark story´s yet but there is always some sick thing in it.

I just say keep up the good work.

And well it seems that i read a bit to fast there, somehow i don´t get it right away that they are all death.

[Ninetails]

4528909 I went with a male because he has the title Lord which is usually given to a male. Also the much deeper voice he has. But truth be told it could be either way.

[eternal nothingness]

4528948 ah I see hm a very nice chapter celestia and luna should never have messed with a demon lord.

thank you for answering me lord Ninetails, vassle of lord yami, fake priestess, killer of queen himiko, and lord of oni island

I can't wait to see what you do next!

[Ninetails]

4528987 No problem loyal peon. Also do I actually have that many titles? Man I need to check up on this.

[eternal nothingness]

4528998 actually all of those titles are things you either are or have done you are a vassle of lord yami, you killed and took over a priestess, you did kill queen himiko and you were the lord of oni island.
I honestly hope you show the equestrians the power of a demon lord!
also not sure but is ninetails able to make curse zones? never really sure about that.

[Ninetails]

4532180 I do not make cursed zones. I left that up to Orochi. He seemed to enjoy it. I will show them my power but not in ways you might be thinking.

[eternal nothingness]

4532198 alright than....hahaha this will be interesting.
also....I know that you change into 9 different people when you get shocked with lightning will that happen in this one? and if so what will they turn into?
also will ammy be in the fic? figured I would ask.

[Ninetails]

4532796 I do have that happen and they are just the tube foxes. And no Amaterasu or Shiranui. I may do a fic with them later.

[Xzaves]

4520691 Don't forget his good shield spells and awesome surfer voice

[Worgen1607]

This is getting really good so far, keep up the great work.

[The A I]

This is good. When will next chapter come out?

[onsholo]

4520691 Neopotism is magic!

[ShadowCelebi]

MUST... HAVE... MOOOOAAAARRRR!!!

[Izarra Kiania]

Imagine you were alone. Imagine you had no memories. You were in pain and just when you thought it couldn't get worse, you looked up and saw the face of the devil himself.

Hello, Doctor...

[Zeraligator]

must... get... update!

[vinilscratchedmynose]

[3volve]

give me more i i will listen to dubstep for 10 fucking hours

[Asashi - Dark Fist Inari]

This has GOT to be uncancelled man.

[3volve]

[Ninetails]

5525951 um wut

[3volve]

c2.staticflickr.com/4/3343/3574361031_37fd79b769.jpg pldh.net/media/dreamworld/038.png lparchive.org/Okami/Update%2018/11-ninetails.png so many foxs in games why plz make more

ro i llik ouy

[3volve]

my hart broke i thought this story was really good

[Asashi - Dark Fist Inari]

Really disappointing that you let this die man, you don't have the spine to be able to bash Equestria.

[Magical]

It's depressing when a story as good as this, goes down the gutter.
(Keep up the good work by the way.)

[Necron Lord]

This story is so great and was really interested in where it was going, but alas it was cancelled (such a shame). However im glad that it has been cancelled an not put on hiatus/uncompleted forever.

[Rockstar_Raccoon]

Hmm...
If you're still interested in this concept, I might be able to bring it into the sequel to Displaced Into Nothing...

[Ninetails]

8524148
hmmmmm how so?

[Rockstar_Raccoon]

8524557
Meta is going to go to a lot of parallel universes in that one, many of them having other Displaced. I could use this, if you wanted to do some sort of soft reboot...

[Ninetails]

8525216
if you want to do a crossover I would be happy to write for my part of this story.

[Rockstar_Raccoon]

8526035
It wouldn't be for a while. I just wanted to bring it up because I clicked your name after seeing you'd favorited Displaced Into Nothing, and saw you'd written one too, so I figured I should bring it up.

[Rockstar_Raccoon]

This is a very well written story though. Why did you stop writing it?

[Ninetails]

8526269
real life got in the way

[Rockstar_Raccoon]

8526308
Right, well, if you ever wanted to pick it back up, you could have Meta do all sorts of things which would drastically alter the course of the plot, ranging from giving him some better empathy or control of his powers, to simply transplanting him to another universe where they don't hate him.

[Earthpatriot117]

This story looked awesome. What happened to it?

[Earthpatriot117]

Will this story ever be updated again?

[Vigriff]

Shame that this story couldn't continue, Ninetails has always been my favorite character in Okami.

[xenomorph1987]

please make more

[Aether Spark]

He destroyed Ponyville and everyone in it??

[Loganic]

Shame.

[Ray MorningLight]

Good story, good