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Silver Shine


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It was a peaceful day, nothing out of the ordinary happening. Twilight and friends were doing their own things, busy with stuff as usual. But a portal opened somewhere in the Everfree Forest, sending a strange pony flying into their world. Three others opened in different locations through Equestria, and each brought a pony with them. But the first portal may not be throwing a single pony at Equestria. A deadly beast may have found its way through...Or maybe it created the portal...

This is a crossover with RWBY, so please do not read this if you do not like RWBY, will hate on this for crossovering with RWBY, or anything of the such. This will be broken into twelve chapters, each named after one song from the RBWY soundtrack. Keep an eye out for updates on each chapter, as not every update will be a new chapter, but possibly an expansion.

Note: OC tag is used for the RWBY characters and the villain.
Note: Any chapters with 0 words are there to mark down each chapter, and will be added to eventually.
Note: I will delete any hate comments.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 13 )
Comment posted by nodamnbrakes deleted Feb 22nd, 2014

OH MY LUNA IT'S A RWBY CROSSOVER!!!! I WUB RWBY!!! ROOSTERTEETH!!! RUBY ROSE!!! YANG!!! WEISS!!! BLAKE!!! ALL OF THEM!!!

:rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss:*is fangirling everywhere* OHMYGOSHOHMYGOSHOHMYGOSHOHMYGOSHOHMYGOSHOHMYGOSHOHMYGOSHOHMYGOSHOHMYGOSHOHMYGOSHOHMYGOSHOHMYGOSHOHMYGOSHOHMYGOSHOHMYGOSHOHMYGOSHOHMYGOSH

*continues fanboying/fangirling everywhere* keep it going!!!! it's so gooooooodd!!!!!

This is a hate comment; Good story so far.

Gonna keep my eye on this one. Could use with more detail, such as having a bit more involvement with the fight between Ruby and the Timberwolf.

Also, this still alive or dead?... gonna call dead.

Update soon please, other than that, really good so far!:twilightsmile:

Nicely done, and you didn't have Twilight holding the idiot ball. I mean, how often do portals open in two places at once? Or move?

Could slow down a bit and give us more detail on Ruby's reactions to being a pony, fighting a wooden wolf, and going through a portal. Not that she'd have too many problems with it, she's Ruby and a huntress -in-training, but still. Things were happening a little too fast. Great jobs so far, otherwise.

Now please don't let this story die.

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