(She/her) Nothing says happy birthday like summoning the spirits of your dead relatives
Twilight is working on her studies at her library home when she receives a strange note from Pinkie Pie asking Twilight to come see her. Naturally, being a good friend, she goes to find out what's up, and finds out Pinkie's deepest darkest secret.
Note: No, this is not another Cupcakes. Cupcakes is referenced, but that's not the route this story follows
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Well, that was unreasonably terrifying ...
3976760 It's so strange! Everypony keeps saying that!
I can't imagine why...
3976765 Well, for me, it's the idea of the identical fleshsuits. That sort of thing creeps me out.
well after season three its a new way to look at the cupcake story, use the flesh for suits and the meat in the cupcakes.....the whole town could be nothing but pinkies in suits
I almost thought you were going for another cupcakes for a moment, I was about to dislike the hell out of this!
Good thing I kept reading!
*jaw hits floor* Wud?
3977122 Hey, me neither!
3977849 Yay for continuing to read!
3978338 I can't tell if that's a good sign or bad sign. You should probably see a doctor if your jaw tends to do that though.
3978363 I was suprised
You got me there! So relived. I've seen cupcakes... I don't wanna talk about that
Thank god it wasn't that. Another lesson for me to learn; don't judge a book by its cover. In this case, don't judge a STORY by its TITTLE! Love it, hope you write more stories like this!!! 
3991817 Aww, thanks!
I've actually written another story inspired by this (sorta) but it's kind of sick and I'm debating whether to publish it or not
Well, that realy
dumb.weird
3995661 *was really
Thank you for your valuable insight on how I can improve my writing style
3995959
I just had a lack of anything else to comment =P
Is "I like muffins." a relevant comment? No? Well okay then
There's another story that's kind of like cupcakes called "The End of the Rainbow" and the author split it in two stories. The first story told everything that happened and the ending after it happened. The second story said the same things, except it also showed the part where RD is being tortured and killed. I think it would be cool if you could make a second story, or another chapter, that people can read if they want to know what happens to Twilight. Just a suggestion. But this was really cool!
3991857 You should! My favorite genre of mlp fanfic is (especially all combined into one story): Sad, Dark, Tragedy. I don't know why I like these, but I just do...
3999638 I need to make it longer, apparently I'm like 100 words short
But yeah, I'll probably upload it if I can make it longer
Keep an eye out, I'll probably upload it later this week. Sooner if I decide sleep is for the weak again
3999648 Wait, there's a limit for how short your story can be?
I didn't know...
3999708 1000 words or longer or you can't publish it
3999716 Well that makes me feel better when (or if) I publish a story, because I love and feel like i need to write long stories.
I... Holy fuck, excuse my language, that was something else. Here I think the fast pacing went well and ended with my eyes widening in realization and horror at what was happening. Great story, I loved the end! Haha. It comes to show that you don't need a lot of details or experience to write really good fics. (That is not to sound rude...) I really liked this. Good job. The beginning started off a bit too fast, but it quickly smoothed out as it continued. Finally that end... Damn... It's like the freaking body snatchers, but pony style. Soon the whole of Equestria will be replaced by Pinkie Pies... XD
4009259 Haha, I'm glad that you enjoyed it
Found a spelling error
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Your friend,
Trade Jack
Well I'm glad Cupcakes inspired you. This fic, in my opinion, was great, and I hope you continue to write and perfect your craft.
4062884 Wow, thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Woah! Awesome story!
4400231 Thanks!
I gotta say it sure was different. Im glad i read it
........AAAAAAAAAUUUUUUUUGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!! But seriously, this story is actually really terrifying to me. Not that I hate it, I like it a lot, but I think this to be more horrifying than Cupcakes! I mean, the very thought that something like this could happen,is bone-chillingly frightening, wouldn't you say? I thought I was paranoid before, now I'm scared that something just like what happened to Twilight in this story might happen to EVERYBODY. ON. EARTH! Yeah, thanks for the Nightmare Fuel. I really appreciate it.
4504483 You're welcome friend!
Intersesting...
But you should've added more..
PLZ DO SO
I was expecting a dark comedy, given the comic for the cover image.
Damn, that got quite dark. And not in the comedy way either. Just... wow.
But I found myself enjoying this, strangely enough. Hmm... upvote and move on.
O_O *runs all the way back to manehattten* I SAW NOTHING!
4724223 Upvote and never look back!
That was... what the Hell was that?! In any case, I think I liked it... whatever it was... upvote, favorite, and meds to come...
5613133 It turned out a lot darker then I had originally planned when I came up with the idea, haha. Glad you think you liked it at any rate
5613145 I run a reviewing comedy show, so if I ever have an episode about one-and-done stories, this is going to get some praise in it!
5613155 Really?
Omigoshomigoshomigoshomigosh! 
5613886 Indeed! It may be a while, I'm currently having both a theme month for Applejack AND a 20 Follower special where I have to review the worst story ever made. But, as soon as both of them are done, I'm going to make the one-shot episode!
5614151 *fangirling intensifies*
it was a little scary, but all in all I'm happy that those pinkies can live, on the one hand I'm sorry for the fate of the mane six, but on the other .. .. ..
fun, fun, fun, fun, fun, fun
Pinkies conquest the world
I'm undecided between cheering for the pinkies that invade the world ......... and perhaps the multiverse
or be sorry for the other inhabitants of equestria
anyway ......... live pinkie