Ash. they/them. Loves Fluttershy, Pokemon, and the color pink.
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S'cute, and the writing itself is fairly solid. I liked it.
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Thank you very much for that. I'm glad that you like it, and I hope to write even more that you and other people enjoy.
This
needsdeserves more likes.The paragraphs may be a little too bulky at the beginning and near the end-though, that could be just me-in any case, that doesn't really detract from the feels and entertainment value I've gotten out of reading it.
Liked and faved.
This story is amazing, I honestly can't believe that this story isn't thought out. Its an amazing story.
Aww.
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I wanted to thank you all for liking and faving... and for saying those things that have got me blushing up a storm right now. Every comment really boosts my confidence more than you could know. So, again... thanks.
I thought it was a very sweet moment between the three fillies. It's great to see you getting back into the swing of things. Good luck on your next project.
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Thank you. And yeah, I know I haven't really been doing much. It seems that every time I tried I just sort of got stuck right in the middle and for the life of me couldn't find the words I needed to continue. Even though this is short, you have no idea how awesome it feels to finish something, and I'm really glad you like it. I'm not sure if this luck will continue over once I start my project, but... but I'll try -- I really will!
I like it. The style is nicely ornate; I don't see it that often, and I like it. You have a lot of heart, and it comes through in your stories. The richness of your style, and the frank way you presented the emotional conflict sucked me right into the story. You could do with some improvement, but keep it up. I'll check in on you later. Perhaps I'll give you a watch...
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Thank you very much for the comment and those compliments. I'm actually sort of surprised -- pleasantly, mind you -- to find that someone likes my writing style. I tend to get sort of wordy sometimes, and I'm always afraid that it will draw people away. That being said, you just helped out my confidence a bit, so thanks again. Really.
I have a sudden urge to call my two best friends.
I'm not crying, you're crying.
That was a good story.