Ash. they/them. Loves Fluttershy, Pokemon, and the color pink.
After the events of "Sweet and Elite", Rarity finds that her eyes are drawn to a certain picture sitting on her work table -- and that she's done a terrible thing. When her mind spirals into thoughts of her roots and the family that she allegedly hates, Rarity is forced to face her mistakes. Guilt trips and deep conversations with Applejack are had.
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That question always bugged me. I will have a read.
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Thank you very much for the read, like and favorite.
But... what do you mean 'question'?
Really enjoying your style of writing -- it's colorful and quite expressive. Dialogue's great too! Rarity feels like Rarity, which is not easy to pull off.
Nicely done!
3830878
Thank you very much for the compliments!
I'm always super worried about how consistent the writing is and about how good my writing style is in general, so I'm glad you like it. 
I've wondered about her accent at times, since it does appear that she is a Ponyville native. Very well done and I agree with 3830878, you did a good job with Rarity. And with the accent as well
3830956
Thank you for your kind words! I honestly wasn't expecting so many compliments. It's... nice. And it helps my confidence a bit.
Though I have to say, I don't think this will be quite what everyone expects, given all of your comments thus far. Whether that's a good or bad thing... I'll guess we'll just have to find out, huh?
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You're welcome. This is a topic that I really haven't seen discussed before, and yet it is one that makes sense
You're doing a really great job with Rarity in this story. Both her dialogue and thoughts are very fitting and well in character. I also have to admit that she is a very easy character to get wrong at times. Well done.
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Thank you very much for the favorite, like and comment. It's always nice to see that you like my stories.
And I'm glad that my Rarity could impress everyone this much -- she's an absolute joy for me to write. I'll be sure to keep this one going.
Alternate Universe tag added after canon took my idea, crushed it, and then stuffed its remains down my throat.
... sort of.
It was a pretty good episode. I really liked it, in fact. But it did pretty much leave me forced to put the tag there in order to keep what happens here (or what will happen later if I can ever muster up the creativity to write chapter two) relevant.
... sort of.
It's complicated.
I'm intrigued.. [insert troll face here]
This is amazing.
. Keep going
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Ah, past-me, you were so optimistic. I can't see myself getting more views for this story, but I might as well say it: this is officially cancelled. Technically it has been for a while (two years. two years...); I just haven't had the heart to put the tag on it. Sorry, everypony. I guess things just didn't work out.