• Published 24th Dec 2013
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Fluttershy's Mansion - Shazam 25



When Fluttershy wins a free mansion, she find it full with ghosts!

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A New Day

Rarity told Twilight what has happen through out the mansion as she pull the vent off Twilight's neck.

Like her friends Twilight was surprise that Fluttershy went though a ghost full Mansion just to save all of them.

"Glad to see you're alright Miss Sparkle." Ghost Studies said as he walk up to her.

"Thanks, Ghost Studies. I never heard of a earth pony studying ghost before." Twilight said.

"Ah! A wonderful thing to discover. I learn a lot about ghosts, but I'm not taking all the glory. Oh no, some of it belongs to Fluttershy herself." Ghost Studies said.

"Where is Fluttershy anyway?" Twilight ask what she notices the yellow timed Pegasus was no where in sight.

"I think she went outside to watch the sun rise." Rainbow Dash answers.

"Yes she did. She went though the whole Mansion in one night!" Ghost Studies said.

"Well let's go find her." Applejack said and they rest walk out of the shack.


They found Fluttershy sitting on the ground with the Ghost Seeker 3000 next to her and watching the sunrise.

The others join her and watch as Celestia's sun shine over the Everfree Forest. When it hit the Mansion, it disappear.

"Hey! Where did the mansion go?" Rainbow ask.

"Well I'll be!", Ghost Studies said, "The Mansion was a fake!"

"Fluttershy just went though a fake mansion to save us?" Rainbow ask confuse.

Ghost Studies didn't answer. He didn't have one.

Fluttershy stood up and reach for the Ghost Seeker when she heard something from it.

"Ghost Studies, can you open the Ghost Seeker? I mean if that all right with you." Fluttershy ask.

"Of course my dear, just hand on." He said and lower himself to it.

Once he got it open, he shouted. "TO CATCH A GHOST!"

The Mane 6 look as well and saw a lot of bits inside.

"WHOA! Where in the hay did all those bits come from?" Rainbow ask in surprise.

"I fond them in...the...mansion." Fluttershy answer.

"So the mansion was fake but the bits are real." Ghost Studies said placing the pieces together.

He stood up and said, "Well all of these bits were found by Fluttershy so she can do what she what's with them."

Applejack and Twilight counted all the bits Fluttershy had. When finish, they were even more shock.

"Fluttershy, you have over 100,000,000 bits in here! Applejack said.

"That makes you the riches pony of all of Equestria." Twilight added.

Fluttershy was surprise as well. But she had a idea for all the bits she had.

"I know what to do with all these bits.", She said, "Ghost Studies, would you like to come back to Ponyville?"

"Hm? OH! Yes, of course! I love too." He answer.

Ghost Studies close the Ghost Seeker 3000 and Fluttershy put in back on her back.

Then the seven ponies left the Everfree Forest.


They reach to Ponyville and head straight to the Mayor.

There Fluttershy said that she wanted to build a mansion and show her the bits she had.

Mayor Mare told all of Ponyville of Fluttershy's plan and went near her house.

Fluttershy chose a clear land not far from it and everypony started build.

Soon the words of Fluttershy building a mansion was heard though out Equestria. Ponies everywhere came to help.

Some of the rich ponies saw Fluttershy bits and ask if she can join a few parties.

Fluttershy told them that she was using it all on the mansion and kindly turn down their requests.

The Princesses also heard about Fluttershy's Mansion and they came to see it.

Fluttershy told all the fillies her adventure in the hunted mansion and Ghost Studies even brought the pictures so show them.

They all saw some of them remind them of the ponies today. However the lost picture shock them.

"Is that Nightmare Moon?" Silver Spoon ask.

"Yes and No." Ghost Studies answer.

"Yes, because it is Nightmare Moon and no, because that the ghost of Nightmare Moon." Fluttershy explain.

"And you caught her, Lady Fluttershy?" Luna ask.

"Yes and now she just a picture." Fluttershy smile.

"You were very brave Fluttershy." Celestia said proud of her.

"I really wasn't but I had to do it, for my friends." Fluttershy said and explain the battle with Nightmare Moon.

It took a few weeks but, Fluttershy's new Mansion was finally finish. Mayor Mare stood on the stage with a red ribbon round the Mansion.

"Welcome all of Equestria! Today marks the day of Fluttershy new mansion for homeless fillies and animals. I here by call Fluttershy's Home to the Homeless OPEN!" The mayor side and the Mane 6 cut the ribbon.

A picture was snap and was place on the paper. Fluttershy was the happiest out of all ponies.

The nightmare was over and her friends were save. She sat down in her chair in her own house and look out the window to see the Mansion that was build.

It had two pillars and ten windows, five on top and five on the bottom, They (along with the roof) was pink and the rest of the Mansion was yellow. On the front was three butterflies like her Cutie mark.

Fluttershy smile and then turn to the Ghost Seeker 3000 on the wall. Ghost Studies let her keep it and Fluttershy give him some bits and he said that her was going back to the shack and bring some of his stuff back so he can move in Ponyville.

Fluttershy lay back in her chair and fell asleep.


Inside of Ghost Studies shack, the picture of Nightmare Moon shook before being still again.

"It's not over yet, Element of Kindness!" a voice was heard as the place was darken, with laugher be heard in the back ground.

THE END?

Author's Note:

Short I know, but that how I made it. Next is Fluttershy's Mansion Dark Moon is longer than this. Don't forgot this was base off the game and it look rush too. Now one more reminder, I don't own any of the Luigi's Mansion games. Hope you like the second one.

Comments ( 27 )

I like it a lot. Luigi's Mansion is one of my favorite games, and so the Dark Moon. I hope you make it soon.

3722799 Dark Moon is on Fanfiction but it will be on here soon.:twilightsmile:

Comment posted by Shazam 25 deleted Jan 19th, 2014

I'm sorry but this isn't the first Lugi's mansion crossover:pinkiegasp::fluttercry:, but it is not be ahamed that you came up with the Idea. A stroy that is fantastic is sweeties' mansion with a whole lot of plot,action and drama:pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy::unsuresweetie:.

3859809 I know about Sweetie Belle's Mansion but that story was cancelled. I think this is the first Luigi's Mansion Crossover with Fluttershy. Plus I base off the game, which mind you and other Readers, I don't own!

I haven't even beaten the game yet and I'm about to read this story.:rainbowwild:

3960205 I don't even own the game!:pinkiehappy:

3960321 The game is so awesome, you need it. Your life will not be complete without it.

4208869 I don't have a GameCube and I can't download off my Wii either.

4208940 Which Wii do you have? If you have the original, all you need is a controller, a Game-Card, and LM.

4209002 The original Wii and I don't got the money to get all that stuff. Check out Fluttershy's Mansion: Dark Moon yet? It still being work on and it a lot longer this this one.

4209045 Nope. Still reading this one. I will be finished in a bit, so I'll check it out then!

4209049 Ok, just remember Dark Moon is much longer and I'm still not done with it.

4209091 Can I collab with you? I have already beat the game, and umm... No offense, but you need an Editor.

4209106 Yeah, Twilight Mercer did the first chapter and just stop all together and I put up 2-6 just so I can get a move on. I hear that too many times, Get an Editor. Way too many times, no one perfect.

4874523 Thank you.:twilightsmile: I still have to finish Dark Moon and I got both games out of the way.

Want an editor? Your in desperate need of one.

4983133 Do you want to be it? The last two haven't been keeping up with.

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I'll be one if you don't mind. But I'd have too do it on a weekly basis. Like Friday and Saturday?

4983169 Sure, If I'm right, chapter one has been proofread already, but not sure about chapter two. Do you want send by PM or a Google Drive?

I wonder if Fluttershy took the entire Nightmare funds. Hold it how did Nightmare Moon become a ghost? Unless...ILLUMINATI IS INVOLVED!!!:pinkiegasp::applejackconfused:

6698392 Thanks, I made it back during my first year on Fanfiction. So, sorry about the grammar. Twilight Mercer was taking so long I went ahead and post the rest of the story.

This is a perfect crossover story For MLP and Luigi's Mansion. Fluttershy is clearly the perfect pony to explore the mansion and rescue her friends. I love how you created an original pony for these stories that's supposed to be Professor E Gadd.

9295271
hello good to see you again
I'm still waiting on an update on your story
yep still waiting :pinkiecrazy:

3678867
well you did the 1st and second and im just gonna endlessly wait for 3s next chapter

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