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TThe Adventures of Dr.LunyJoy, Book 1.
MLP: FiM
Adventure
Comedy
Dr.LunyJoy is a blue male unicorn with a brown mane. Unfortunately, he was dragged into changeling country unconscious without his pills for multipersonality disorder at the royal wedding.
Gore
Twilight
Derpy
Other
Shining Armor
Changelings
Dr.LunyJoy · 5.2k words · 620 views

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Plain Hunter

Plain Hunter #9 · Nov 27th, 2014 · · ·

Hey, thanks for adding Super Smash Bros. Equestrian Brawl to your favorites! It really means a lot to me.

Erol carstein

Erol carstein #8 · Feb 11th, 2014 · · ·

Hey there!

Thanks for making a favourite of The Heavenfall! If there's anything at any point during the story you'd like to point out or have a question about, be sure to leave me a comment.

Once again, thanks!

Erol carstein

Erol carstein #7 · Jan 10th, 2014 · · ·

Hey there!

Thanks for favouriting Terminal World . I really appreciate your support, and if you've got anything about the story you'd like to point out then don't forget to leave me a comment, I feed on constructive criticism .

Once again, Thanks!

Dr.LunyJoy