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BRyeMC


The retired "Clarity" story guy.

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"Clyde" really had nothing going for him and deemed himself very unlucky in the first part of his life. Even his real name was forgotten and abandoned in the sea of loneliness.

After watching his father and brother leave him and seeing his mother die in the hospital in front of him, he always seemed alone and struggled to find happiness. His only true childhood friend was the music that his brother gave to him. Music remained his only true friend for a long time. That was, until he met Tyrone and the rest of his new friends. Especially, a certain "Rarity" on a trip returning from Seaddle.

Some later story scenes tie in with The Poncho Chronicles I: The Beans and The Poncho Chronicles II: South Beach.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 22 )

The first coupleof paragraphs are well written, but I will finish the Poncho Chronicles first!

i wonder if your gonna take spikes feelings into account.
no one ever does it.
Edit: sorry i haven't read the others, did you take his?

4098908 Sort of. In the first story of the series, Rarity states Spike asked her out countless times but she told him no so he stopped. I don't ship them personally, so I didn't get too involved with it as it's merely a crush. Then again, that's just my opinion on the matter.

4098949
let him down gently or rudely?

4098952 I never got into it, but it's implied gently. This was before the series happened.

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ah ok, i guess ill give it a chance.

Interesting story. Great job with the grammar, but no offense, not my style. Please don't take that badly, it just not what I like to read.

4189920 Thanks for the comment! I'm glad you took a look though. No harm feelings.

4189967 Best luck with writing this story.

It was interesting enough. Nice touch with the writing a book bit. (Haha get it? bit?)

4210775 Thanks! I don't know if I should write another part that involves the last two stories though. I wanted this to be like a prequel but I decided to incorporate events from the PC to give it more sense as a point of view.

4365254 Thanks for your review!

I originally made this after I completed the first two stories of The Poncho Chronicles, which told about CB and the cult and all of the past problems. I didn't want to be redundant and tell them again, so I gave a brief summary of the events, that Clyde thought was important, since it is his point of view. With what you said, I will do that now. All of your questions are answered in the first two stories, which of course I should know, you can't assume people read those.

I'm glad you liked the ending! Thanks again!

4365356 I will do as you suggest! I'm glad you at least enjoyed it. I will make sure to improve it off of what you said.

Thanks again! (Also thanks for the boost in the grade!)

4761250 Hope you appreciate him a little more and why he is defensive when it comes to certain ponies!

Next chapter??? :raritycry: or are the story dead? :raritycry:

5625794 Dead? It's only a one chapter story.

It's weird seeing comments for this story (and the PC) as they aren't the best stories I wrote honestly. I'm glad you decided to read it though. It's always important for people to know pony Clyde's backstory. :raritywink:

5625871 Well at least i can tell you that it's NOT bad it's a very good one :) actually at this very moment i'm reading Miss Bonnibelle :D

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