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Feather Note


"Never believe that a few caring people can't change the world. For indeed, that's all who ever have." ~ Margaret Mead

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A human formed from nothing has been sent to the land of Equestria for reasons unkown. Born from the nothingness of darkness, he is met by Twilight who finds him unconscious in the middle of the Everfree Forest. What will happen will change the fates of many of her friends and of this mysterious being. Can he, Twilight, and her friends figure out why he is here and where he comes from or will a dark power rise and take over.

Edit: I did forget to do this, so I'll go ahead and say that this takes place just before season 4 begins. And another thing I forgot, hopefully this is the last one, it also takes place way before MLP: EG.

Chapters (9)
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Comments ( 96 )

Very interesting! I'm loving this! :pinkiehappy:

Is Xaniel Nyx's Nobody? Probably a dumb question but I feel the need to ask it.

3639023 Oh no, Nyx doesn't have a nobody, this nobody comes from someone else. Don't worry though, I'll reveal who Xaniel belongs to.:twilightsmile:

3639316 Well only a few things, but if you watch a few playthroughs, many things become clear. But dont worry Nightmare Nyx, you should get along fine with this.:twilightsmile:

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I just wanted to ask. Curiosity and all.

3640958 Oh don't worry curiosity is a good thing.:twilightsmile:

Great chapter! By the way, I heard you're sick and I hope ya feel better! :pinkiehappy:

3666884 Thank you for your concern Xemnas and thank you for the praise. I didn't expect this story to get so many views this quickly.:twilightsmile:

3666887 You're most welcome my friend. Anyway, HAPPY HOLIDAYS! :pinkiehappy:

..... ok then .... i dont even know .... good chapter

suddenly i want bacon ... anyone else up for some bacon ... or maple bacon even

3670750 That actually sounds pretty good right now.

i wish i could have a ( friendly nonviolent /evil) shadow heartless for a pet i would die of joy

Let me guess, the beast is a Timberwolf! Keep up the amazing work! I wonder what all these memories of Xaniel's could possibly mean? And just how is he connected to Kairi and Roxas? Loving every bit of this! Update soon!

By the way, if you can, please take a look at my story! It's my first one on this website!:pinkiehappy:

3711530 Yeah I'll go ahead and check it out. :twilightsmile:

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Thanks pal. Keep up the good work! Oh, and if I come up with any ideas to help out your story, I'll let ya know. :moustache:

Xaniel is Roxas' nobody!:pinkiehappy:

(Hope I'm not wrong this time):trixieshiftright:

3711781 :twilightangry2:

FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
:flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:

3711786 Goood try though. I will elaborate who Xaniel belongs to. On Chapter VI :twilightsmile:

3671511 How would you tame one though?


3720573 Yeah, so just be patient and your thirst for curiosity and interest will be satisfied.

Why do I get the feeling that the one Xaniel is forgetting is Sora.

Plus, Riku and Nyx do have a lot in common.

3735625 Well I'll let you in on a little secret. Reason why Xaniel hasn't been able to remember Sora? Roxas has something to do with it. Enjoy thinking about why now. :trollestia:

3798780 Thank you. I appreciate all feed back and criticism, (Since this is my first story after all) but nevertheless, I don't mind it too much. :twilightsmile: :pinkiehappy: :yay:

That yay was because of what I was listening to.

3798780 Oh and you should read the rest of the story to what I have so far. You'll definitely love it. :twilightsmile:

Crud. Master Xehanort, Xigbar, and Saïx. :twilightoops: I'm curious as to who that mystery member is though.

Three dark portals formed in the middle of the Everfree Forest. Then the three Organization members came out, looking at there surroundings. Everything was peaceful feeling, which didn't bode well for them. But soon this world would fall to the darkness like the rest of them. All three of them had the same goal in mind, finding the new nobody and destroying him, permanently.

Neo Organization XIII has arrived!!! :pinkiegasp:

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If your all wondering why I put Xaniel as number fifteen (Unless it's simply too easy to ask this) is that I still consider Xion as Organization Member number XIV. Plus what good would've it done to simply just try and replace her, that is pretty much impossible.

Also a :yay: for Xion's hopeful return in Kingdom Heart's III. :pinkiehappy:

You read warriors?:pinkiegasp:

YES!

3830501 Of course! :yay: I've been reading it since the beginning. I've even thought about making a story with them and MLP. I will be a bit difficult to get things to work together, but it shouldn't be too hard? :scootangel:

3830521 It shouldn't be hard, but for the love of Celestia if you do make it, don't make it a "Mane 6 get transported to the lake/forest/mountains and automatically become clan/tribe members." I have seen a few of those, and they suck.:facehoof:

Quick question about this fic though, those are Axel's weapons right? And if so if Xaniel a nobody of a nobody?:rainbowhuh:

3830582 Well of course I won't make them just appear in the clans. I mean come on. I know that they wouldn't readily accept them just right away.

Oh and that cross or plus looking weapon is not related to Axel's Chakrams. He is not a nobody of a nobody either. I mean I don't think nobodies can have a nobody of their own? :unsuresweetie: That is a good question though.

3841812 Of course not. It doesn't even revolve around the Xenomorphs. :rainbowderp:

Guess we were wrong about the third figure being Young Xehanort. It's Xemnas. Excellent chapter though.

3942124 Oh don't feel to bad about it. Besides...things have only just begun. :trollestia:


3942277 :moustache: Right back at yah.

3946530 Thank you my good friend...tell me...what was so great? (Just curious, I don't mean this in a bad way) :twilightsmile:

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