A CPA making his way in the corporate world.
Fluttershy visits her favorite forum and discovers that an anonymous pony wants to feed a parakeet arsenic and is looking for advice on how to get the bird to comply. Fluttershy wants to save the parakeet from doom. The question is: Who is the troll?
I might make this a longer series but it really depends on how what kind of reception Part I gets.
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Actually that's interesting... I will probably come back when there is more to read.
Also, do you have an editor or something? It could help you improving your style a bit. It feels... unusual. Not really bothering, but pretty unusual.
Keep on writing
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Trolls trying too hard /sarcasm
*Thumbs up*
A continuation of this could be good.
This is actually super interesting. I can't wait until this continues!
I just knew it was Celestia- I mean Trollestia.
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Well! That was a whole lotta something.
hmm...
#sadfacetime! 
LOL!
Pretty decent, but you need to work on your editing, with long stretches of conversation it was confusing to figure out who was saying what from time to time, the over all story was pretty good and the twist ending was nice. Over all I say it is pretty good a kind of funny, but work more on the editing next time.