The Mane One

Twilight Sparkle has competently ruled over Equestria for 85 years . Being an alicorn has its perks but it gets lonelier and lonelier each year.

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Comments ( 8 )

Netloids Ultimatum #1 · Aug 4th, 2020 · 1 · ·

This is great. Sad as hell, but great. Such a simple idea, but I've never seen anyone focus on it with this specific scenario before. Great job.

Nineveh Orion #2 · Aug 4th, 2020 · · ·

I want to like this. I do. But you've done nothing new that hasn't been done to death before by other Weepy Immortal Twilight stories.

Apple Bloom as Goddess of the Moon was a nice touch. But it feels like it has no place at all in the story, and you only added it for no real reason.

An explanation of how and why Apple Bloom is where she is would help.

Duke of Canterlot #3 · Aug 5th, 2020 · · ·

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Thank you, I'm glad to hear you enjoyed the story!
Definitely was a sad story to write.

Duke of Canterlot #4 · Aug 5th, 2020 · · ·

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My next story is going to be in the same "future universe" - the story of how Apple Bloom becomes the Goddess of the Moon.

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Pete100 #5 · Aug 6th, 2020 · 1 · ·

This was bittersweet.

StardustRandomness #6 · Sep 22nd, 2020 · 1 · ·

You brought a tear to my eyes.

Great little story you made.

Shady Mist #7 · Oct 19th, 2020 · 1 · ·

"Summer Sun Celebration"? I think you meat the "Festival of the Two Sisters" now.

Ded account #8 · Mar 13th, 2021 · · ·

Wait...
why didn't Apple Bloom tell Fluttershy to say hi to Button to?
or is he still alive!

Duke of Canterlot