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Duke of Canterlot


A CPA making his way in the corporate world.

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Prince Blueblood needs to pick a wife of his own.
He has announced this to the world.
Ponies all over seek to marry him.

Blueblood has successfully narrowed it down to three young mares from wealthy families of high status, including Lyra of the Heartstrings family.

Bon-Bon, Lyra's best friend, decides that it is her duty to protect Lyra from the wonderful prince who Bon-Bon perceives to be an asshole.

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 53 )

I think I can see where this will be going, and it's going to be hilarious

You have my curiousity. The ship is leaving port I wanna see what exactly it will be.

I must admit that I had a little help from my dear mother with regards to choosing the final three.

Yah, more like "she picked for me".

Now, we shall eagerly await what happens next...

...huh figured it would take a while to get to this point

Hm...

A very dialogue driven story. Not bad, though you should add a few more facial features. It would let the reader know what to feel when some of the words are spoken.

Ex.

"Good for him, that puts him in between Snails and Sweetie Belle in the intelligence department. Wow, he has exceeded my expectations, woo hoo."

The woo hoo part can be sarcastic, but the right face or expression of hooves can sell her point across.

Maybe he is just tired of golddiggers and trophy wives.
Who knows ? Maybe he is an asshole to repel those mares and he is waiting for true love.
Man , i have to stop reading cheesy romance novels.

I've read a few prince blueblood/lyra fics but this is the first one with bon bon/blueblood I've found even though bon bon seems torn at the moment.:heart:
Maybe he actually wants bon bon as a non judgmental beard for his true sexuality and he really just picked her for her non butt kissing attitude so he have someone who would agree to marry just to get his parents off his back about marrying a mare but also be okay with his secret.

4022165 I haven't been able to find any blueblood/lyra fics. Can you give me some examples of some of them and where I can find them?

Comment posted by Charzoid deleted Mar 2nd, 2014

4022908 Anthro
Pony Hammer <--Its not the main subject of the story here but its implied in later chapters but its not clear if it goes beyond crushes yet.

Bon-Bon thought to herself, "Am I in over my head here? I could probably turn down Blueblood whenever I felt like it, but what if I can't?"

"I don't have an addiction! I can quit Blueblood whenever I want! I just... don't want to right now. That's all."

Interesting. I wonder where this will go.

4025107 You added this to the group, I see... and I LOVE that joke you made. XD

"Ms. Sassy knows that her prince is humble since he does not speak in the third person."

"My next task will be to teach Ms. Sassy how to be humble."

Use a paddle. I bet she'd like that.

I didn't know they had cars in this universe.

A little too fast for me, but it was a great read.

Oh poor Noteworthy:pinkiesad2:

:heart:Sweet story.

Absolutely love it :)

This was a nice fic. It could of been better but I guess the state the fic is now makes it more amazing. Grats for the good job :pinkiehappy:

Instead of agreeing to marry Blueblood right away, she should have just told Blueblood that she wasn't ready yet because she still didn't know him well enough and wanted to continue dating. And if Blueblood was okay with that, then that would be a good sign.

But still, I enjoyed this story.

The Noteworthy Of The Bon-Bon :rainbowkiss::trollestia:

By Faust these characters are boooooring.

Called it!!!!

F*cking called it!!!

Hmm, do I smell a ship?
Personally I prefer Lyra x Bon Bon but I'm always up for an interesting ship, as long as it makes sense and has some chemistry in it. Blueblood x Bon Bon makes for an interesting couple,

Other then that, I'm loving this story so far

"I wonder if Blueblood finds humans to be interesting."

I'm surprised that she didn't not know about the mirror to the human world

Well this is a very interesting start of a story so it looks like blue blood is holding a contest of who's going to be his wife and Bonbon was very not impressed about his decision but somehow made Lyra pretty excited and apparently she has another competition her two friends Minuette and twinkleshine and Lyra is going there to meet him but bon bon is worried about her she she want to go with her which that was sweet of her so I wonder how this will go

That man bitch better not do anything to Lyra or Bon-Bon would give him the worst beating of his life.
Despite Blueblood's tall stature, Bon-Bon doubted he was powerful physically.

I know the episode of Slice of Life did not came around during that time but Bonbon has a lot of fighting skills since she is a secret agent

"Is she that whiny unicorn who got angry when I said I didn't know who she was?"

To be honest Rarity has been living there for a long time and even before she became the elements of harmony I'm surprised you still don't know who she is

"Good. She'll need it when I win", said Minuette. She laughed obnoxiously, which was not surprising to Bon-Bon.

Once again I know this is during the time before any of the 3 ponies twinkleshine Minuette and lemon heart have characters in the official show but it's just so weird seeing them acting like that

Well then that was a unexpected turn of events so it looks like they're on the way to Canterlot to meet with blue blood for this competition for a date and Lyra was pretty excited to be there while Bonbon is still having some thoughts about this guy and I mean really big thoughts about him because given his reputation he is not the most nicest person in the world what's they got there that meeting up with the other competition Minuette and twinkleshine and they will not friendly ones here but then Blue Blood took Lyra first but the others are really talking really mean about Lyra and she was about to break somebody but Blue Blood told them not to be insensitive which that was pretty decent of him but still he still something else but it looks like he's starting having an interest to Bon Bon and something tells me he found a winner because he made the announcement the other day that she won something tells me things are going to get more difficult than ever

Bon-Bon wanted to start things with Lyra so badly, but mistakes were made in the past. The irony was that Blueblood, the pony of Lyra's desires, was now enamored with Bon-Bon. Lyra loved Blueblood. Blueblood loved Bon-Bon. Bon-Bon loved Lyra. The clichéd love triangle was complete!

Yes seriously Love is a Battlefield

Apparently bon bon is really taking a back after that announcement even Lyra wasn't too upset which I'm pretty surprised but she's actually happy for her and it looks like one of the news journalist asking her some questions about her relationship with blue blood which there was none but apparently enough for him to catch his heart so basically she wanted to test them out if he actually is true to what he says and it looks like blue blood showed up as well well this should be an interesting conversation

Well it looks like they had a pretty interesting conversation with each other and it looks like Bonbon is taking a liking of him knowing to the fact that Prince Blueblood is not what he seems and he even admits that he was not the nicest person but he wants to prove that he could be worthy of her heart so it looks like they are planning on a date with each other saying how they are and it looks like they're going to prepare for their date soon

But inside, Bon-Bon wasn't so sure anymore about that. She didn't want to admit it but Blueblood had impressed her already.

She's starting to have some feelings for this dude

"I don't think I have ever told you this, but I was bestowed with the honor to date Prince Blueblood myself. We were at the Grand Galloping Gala together. He was not a gentlecolt at all. He was rude, arrogant, and self-absorbed. It was the worst night ever. I didn't want to have anything to do with him after that fiasco at the Gala. I am perhaps the only other unmarried mare besides you in Ponyville who didn't enter her name into the competition."

Yeah he was really a jerk 🙄

What is a pretty interesting chapter so it looks like Bonbon is getting ready for the date heading for the spa with Lyra and it looks like Rarity and Fluttershy are there as well and they even have a pretty in conversation with each other about Prince Blueblood and how she feel about this whole thing and yeah she's having some conflict feelings about how she feels but yet she really wants this date to go very well and it looks like she's running very late because she fell asleep and the spa so she needs to make it to Canterlot now and she really wants to break up with him but she doesn't know if she wants to or not well let's find out

"Oh, I know. They should call me Pinkie Subtlety Pie! I think Celestia will crown you as Princess Potty Mouth of Ponyville."

Yeah seriously I mean I know it's rated T but I'm just not expecting so much pretty words lol

Well then this was a very unexpected turn of events again so Bonbon is on her way to Canterlot and it looks like she was talking with Pinkie Pie and her unexpected visit there was a cupcake invention which that sounds pretty yummy but once they got there they separate from each other and she waited for Prince Blueblood and speaking of which arrived with a sword and he explained that he was going to slay a dragon which that was worried some to be honest with you but luckily it was just garble and his pals and which he didn't kill anybody which I'm also glad but Bonbon was pretty impressed and even gave him a kiss again that's very cute

"I was born and raised in Ponyville myself", said Lady Opulence, "I even was friends with a mare that looks an awful lot like you. Her name is Candy Crush."

Lol nice 👌

Ok wow so prince Blueblood and bon bon is meeting with the mother of Blueblood named Opulence at first bon bon was pretty nervous about meeting her but things went pretty well and even the mother Improved of her and look like Blueblood pop the question and I wonder what is her question

"I look out for you, Bonnie. You remember that now!"

Bon-Bon smiled at Pinkie. She supposed that was true in some respects.

Aww Pinkie Pie that's so sweet of you

Oh wow that was a pretty nice story so bon bon is still making a decision to make and Blueblood is very understanding about this situation so will wait for her and she want home to Ponyville and in the train she was talking with Pinkie pie about her day and it was nice for Pinkie to help bon bon and once she got home she heard Lyra and Noteworthy are playing a game and she was not that upset and it looks like she made a decision so she want back to Canterlot to talk with Blueblood and once she got there she said yes to the proposal and they got married and after a few years they got kids and he actually is great with kids and it feels like bon bon made a good decision wow this was nice keep up the good work

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