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PseudoFiction


Okay, now I know the empty bottle of whiskey on my desk 'looks' bad, but there's a perfectly sober explanation.

Comments ( 40 )

Interersting can't wait to see more

Uh.......

So it's like humans watching ponies having a clop fest?

Is this the stories plot or I'm just confused.

Hmm...so is this gonna be mindless clop, or is there gonna be a plot somewhere down the line?

Either way, you have my attention

I like this... not for sexual things but for awesome cloaking elite soldiers

Will the human be discovered? And when he does, by whom?

I can never remember the names of that night guard and day guard,But this is like the ninth time ive seen something involving them going at it,And they allways are described or shown the same way......someone mind telling me why?

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I think it would be funny if it was celestia.

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Anyway! *flies into the Authors face* Next Chapter?

OMG! LOL... best way to kill an alicorns moement of pleasure...! xD

I do like air. However do younuse g docs?

3556088 That's why the momma-bird was in this chapter.

I hate it when good idea's like this are thrown down the drain, and
ABANDONED

God damn, I enjoyed reading that!

Aw shit, it was good while it lasted
Good work

Damn it damn it damn it! I sooo wanted him to get caught!

Ah well, fun while it lasted

That was fun god work

I never would have figured first contact was first fuck

Spiderman! Donkey-punch! Something!”

Wow........is this coool

Finally, a new chapter! If I haven't given one already, have a like!

Best chapter yet. Made all the better with the commentary during.

Wonder if there will be any repercussions to this...

I lol'ed. Setting the bed on fire... that's a new one for me XD

Update... I can hear... it back!!!

P.S. You got caught! Dammmit Where the hell is [Next] button?

To quote Gamer Poop: "heeeeeeeyyyyyyy. I like your ass."

It was only a matter of time...

5097886 Same here I actually expected a warzone to appear...:ajbemused::facehoof:guess not...

This will not end well...I only hope that she doesn't remember the sound of his voice...:twilightoops:...he's going to get destroyed next chapter isn't he?

Damn you cliffhanger!!! Lol
Pretty awesome story dude! :)

Are we beginning to see an actual story develop?

Pokes author with a stick I don't know how I found this old story but by God I want moar please !

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