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Okay, now I know the empty bottle of whiskey on my desk 'looks' bad, but there's a perfectly sober explanation.

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What has four legs, wears a bullet-proof vest, can hear you through a solid concrete wall and has a set of highly-trained fangs that can exert up to seven-hundred pounds of pressure per square inch?

One word; Bungee.

Bungee has been a Military Working Dog for as long as he can remember, trained from a pup and turned into a highly effective member of the armed forces. He sniffs out bombs, clears rooms, scouts compounds and assists with flanking manoeuvres to disable dangerous personnel. More than just military equipment; Bungee is a brother in arms. A warrior.

But when a mission goes wrong and Bungee chases a high-value-target through a magical portal; how will the German Shepherd adjust to life among talking ponies?

And how will he manage to complete his mission if he’s considered a pet instead of a soldier?

Rated Teen for violence.

Chapters (16)
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Edit: Just gona get rid of my rather immature comment...

For anyone wishing to read this I highly recommend it. Never read a story that revolves around a dog before...

Vailen #2 · Jun 30th, 2013 · · · 21 ·

Hmm, now this is interesting :trixieshiftright: I've read stories on how humans turn into other animals when they come to Equestria or how certain animals become ponies but this... :pinkiehappy: this is so different from what I've read and can't wait for the next chapter.

you made me cry:fluttercry:


I. Hate. You

FicusCat #4 · Jul 1st, 2013 · · · 21 ·

Original concept.

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Or in Luna's case, proximity to a badass dog(gie!)

Can't wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy:

I am going to follow this fic for sure. Bungee's an endearing figure. He didn't change into something else... just thrown into a whole different set of circumstances.
There's potential with this fic!

I'm not sure how I feel about Luna knowing what bullets and Kevlar are, but I'll keep those concerns down until we see more of Equestria.

In the meantime, keep up the good work!

AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH! Sooooooo GOOOOOOOD!

The feels, you made me shed manly tears:fluttercry: You sir are brilliant

Is this a Ghosts parody I smell? Because that's win.

(Celestia wakes up to find Luna playing with Bungee)
Celestia: ...
Luna: ...uhhhh... I got a pet?....yay?

You sir are a genius! This is a unique premise, and a damn good story thus far! Keep it up! :pinkiehappy: :rainbowdetermined2:

Excellent! Luna gets a kickass pet. This story is...

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I honestly tear up when I see things like that at the end of the story. :fluttercry:

I'm such a sap, I know. :pinkiesmile:

I wonder what Fluttershy will think of him.

oooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhh military dog
haven't found one of these yet
and it doesn't suck, no it's awesome :twilightsmile:

THIS IS AMAZING.....Poor Samantha:fluttercry:

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Given that Fluttershy could actually understand Bungee, she might be a bit disturbed.

"So, umm, what did you do before you came here?"
"Helped kill bad guys with Samantha."
"O-oh. Why are you here?"
"Chasing the bad guy that killed Samantha. Gonna rip his throat out."
"O-oh dear."

ISKV #20 · Jul 2nd, 2013 · · · 21 ·

This is originality. CoD/Halo/Shooters have been done to death, but a friggin dog? This'll be fun.

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Tell it like it is. :rainbowdetermined2:(\

2810158 Oh yes that would be hilarious.

:(

You got me you monster. You got me.

Also:

Instinct and training joined hand in hand and the dog reacted.

Missed a golden opportunity for paw in hand.

Confused as to how blasé Luna is to Kevlar and electronics.

Bungee is superdope.

it's just a dog they said. it's harmless they said.
pfft idiots are all "I"M CRAZY DAKKA DAKKA DAKKA" but when they see the dog they fucking 'RUN'.:rainbowlaugh:

I bawled my eyes out from this first chapter... I am a dog lover myself and this really struck my heart in a such a way.

Keep writing, this is brilliant beyond belief and the best of luck too.

YEAH:flutterrage: SOMETHING ORIGINAL!!!!!! STERIODS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:flutterrage:

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I agree on the specific naming of said items. Would be better to give a generalistic description of kevlar being impacted by a high velocity object.

Amazing chapter to boot. Keep up he good work. I hope you submit to EqD, but be careful, they (The pre readers) be quite stingy...

I love this already keep up the good work

Gaaahhh so many feels Q.Q so good. I love canine stories!!!:fluttercry:

i can already see the potential this has. keep going.:pinkiehappy::heart:

why don't people ever call these dogs something funny, like PvT. Nibbles

When suddenly, feels, out of freaking nowhere. :pinkiesad2:
Wow. First fanfic to make me shed (not so) manly tears and first story in general since Marley and me. Grats.
Now I will proceed to like, fave and bawl my eyes out. :fluttershysad:

I really like this, but I just wanna ask, how does Luna know what a gun is? Not trying to troll or be annoying, just genuinely curious. Keep up the good work!

2819908 Dude....watch S2 E7: May the Best Pet Win! particularly the song itself

Thats all I'm going to say

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I love that song, but I didn't see the reference. Tell meeeeee:fluttercry:

This is such a beautiful, original concept with a awe-inspiring twist.
You seem to have done your homework and gave convincing and beautiful adjectives to describe the scene.
The only minor problem i'm having so far is when describing the dog through the mind of Luna, whom is behind the times even by Equestrian standards, she understands what a bullets are and what kevlar is. Personally I would have created a more confusing scene for her, as she seems to just shrug her shoulders and accept the dog for what it was.
Apart from that I can see a very beautiful story being constructed. I hope not to be let down!
Keep it up!

The scent hit Bungee in an instant as he clambered to his hooves, putting himself between the emerging creatures and his lodging.

So dogs have hooves? Huh... interesting concept.:derpyderp1:

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I cried. Can't even lie about it.

This story has quickly become one of the stories I'm looking forward to seeing update. And I have a lot on my plate at the moment, so that's saying something. Although I do share the complaint of the others with te Kevlar-bullet-electronics business.

Luna has a new friend! :twilightsmile:

Well, this is really good. I am excited to see how this plays out. :pinkiehappy:

Y1
Y1 #43 · Jul 5th, 2013 · · · 21 ·

It's kinda cheating to have a dog as a protagonist, but damn it, I feel for the little guy. Dog In Equestria... who'd a thunk I'd like that?

I love it! This story is great.

Yes!

HELL yes!

HELL FREAKING YES!!!!!

I like this partner, I like it alot

Oh god this story!!!:pinkiehappy::raritystarry::pinkiehappy: !!! You've made me cry as well as make me happy. Keeping going!

a dag being the main character of a MLP fic? now I've sen everything :rainbowkiss:

Yay, it's not another HiE! And the writing is good too. Keep it up :twilightsmile:

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