Spike is the most beloved baby dragon who is also Twilight Sparkle's number one assistant. But what if Spike isn't a dragon? What if Spike's egg was a million years old and he was revived by Twilight when she used her magic? What if ...
Now old Monstrous enemies return and are on the hunt for Spike for he is the son of ... Godzilla. Spike will embark on a journey to not only stop the foes, but to find out who he is.
PS I gots me a new editor, it's Pony Jack so also thank him for the story AND the cover art, it looks awesome
So um I like the premise. But find it really hard to....keep reading... I feel like things are going too fast. The flashbacks? Feel like theyre foreshadowing instead of reminiscing. Zecora was just shooting up too much really, needing blood and what not.
Dude pm I have a proposition that could help this bucking story.
Ol' Spikezilla was hoppin' around...
Like the idea, the writing could be better. I would suggest copying and pasting this into MS works to help with the grammar. Also take your time, it seems a bit rushed.
I've been waiting for this fic. For reasons I cannot explain.
you have my interest
OH OH! I really like to post this!
3496865 Great, now I have that stuck in my head all day.
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1. Who said those were flashbacks, they were said to be only images.
2. Zecora'a business will be revealed with no spoilers.
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I don't know how to pm people, i'm still pretty new.
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Thank you for telling me this, greatly appreciated.
3498699 No problem, that's what I do with my stories. It helps with me make my stories more readable grammar wise.
3498699 There should be a icon that looks like a envelope when you get to my homepage click on it and type in the subject and then write what you want.
MEGANULA!
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how did u know? it was supposed to be dramatic.
Still, good job knowing what it was.
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Canterlot city like a big playground
when suddenly mare-do-well burst from the shade, and hit Spikezilla with a mare-grenade!
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Judging by his name, I'd say he and I are the same. You're writing a Godzilla story, add Meganula, and expect Big G's fans not to
notice?
ALL HAIL GOJIRA! KING OF MONSTERS!
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Also, Gidorah had best be in this. or else Me and Big G won't be pleased
roberthood.net/blog/wp-content/uploads/2008/04/godzilla60s.jpg
But whatever direction you take this story, just remember
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3544596 Spikezilla got pissed and began to attack
but didn't expect to be blocked by Shaq.
Man I gotta say, this story is exactly what I'm looking for in literature
Although there was some grammar and spelling and such that made me go
It was overall entertaining, please continue
If you're having trouble with storyline and all I can help if need be
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Why thank you sir, it would be my honor.
DIS GON B GUD!
I am glad that I don't have any plans to put Zecora into my story. Rhyming couplets are BLECH.
Needs a little work, mainly a little bit of explanation for the events going on. Like how a certain human shows up in Equestria, and how Spike's egg ended up Equestria. Things like that.
But overall, I think it's pretty good.
3908526 Well the human part is explained later in the story so mystery there.
On the Spike thing, haven't u read the first chapter ... or prologue to this story? It says that before the Equestrian era or even the reign of ponykind, there were us humans and monsters so Spike is actually really old and was actually dead in that egg until Twilight used her magic, that magic flew through his veins and gave him life and changed his color to purple and green ... and later a mustache, like so
3908679 I forgot about that.
Yeah a new chapter looking great so far keep up the good work.
Cool!
Nice new chap!
3967219 did you see the bit about you bro?
Also thanks
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Yes, and while it was very nice, it did not make me cry like u said.
3967228 It should've. Also thanks for the help broski it really ... helps lololol have a mustache
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Now that made me cry through laughter!
(P.S. Was not expecting the stache )
Ay, DFang, PM me OK?
Interesting. Most interesting.
4154958 just wait, it gets better.
4154961 I'm sure it does.
While I'm a Zilla fan I'm liking this story.
Godzilla versus first American Godzilla. I like.
At first I was like , but then I was like
I just found this chapter to be funny for some reason.
I love thissss awesome story
More chapterssssssx
Nice you have improved I shall favorite
DON'T BUT A YOUTUBE VID YOUR STORY!!! PLEASE!!! everytime I see somebody do that the story gets taken down.
sorry for the caps
Now that's a pretty awesome story so far, while I'm sorry to see the story is on hiatus, I understand the reasoning behind that and hope that the goddess (Is it a goddess? I dunno) of creativity blesses you to continue this masterpiece story.download
BTW, love the new art, some great genius must have come up with that!:
Spike’s birthday pretty much confirmed his possible kaiju parentage. Hope he learns the Atomic Breath.
Now that I think about it, Spike could be Goji Senior’s child or Goji Junior’s. Wait, they’re both male and can they even lay eggs?
If you need rhymes that will be of use, just go read some Dr. Seuss.