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DarkFang116


I'm just a regular old Joe, except I have a huge imagination.

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Spike is the most beloved baby dragon who is also Twilight Sparkle's number one assistant. But what if Spike isn't a dragon? What if Spike's egg was a million years old and he was revived by Twilight when she used her magic? What if ...

Now old Monstrous enemies return and are on the hunt for Spike for he is the son of ... Godzilla. Spike will embark on a journey to not only stop the foes, but to find out who he is.

PS I gots me a new editor, it's Pony Jack so also thank him for the story AND the cover art, it looks awesome

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 45 )

So um I like the premise. But find it really hard to....keep reading... I feel like things are going too fast. The flashbacks? Feel like theyre foreshadowing instead of reminiscing. Zecora was just shooting up too much really, needing blood and what not.

Dude pm I have a proposition that could help this bucking story.

Ol' Spikezilla was hoppin' around...

Like the idea, the writing could be better. I would suggest copying and pasting this into MS works to help with the grammar. Also take your time, it seems a bit rushed.

I've been waiting for this fic. For reasons I cannot explain. :twilightsheepish:

OH OH! I really like to post this!

3496865 Great, now I have that stuck in my head all day.

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1. Who said those were flashbacks, they were said to be only images.

2. Zecora'a business will be revealed with no spoilers.


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I don't know how to pm people, i'm still pretty new.


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Thank you for telling me this, greatly appreciated.

3498699 No problem, that's what I do with my stories. It helps with me make my stories more readable grammar wise.

3498699 There should be a icon that looks like a envelope when you get to my homepage click on it and type in the subject and then write what you want.

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:pinkiegasp: how did u know? it was supposed to be dramatic.
:pinkiehappy: Still, good job knowing what it was.

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Canterlot city like a big playground

when suddenly mare-do-well burst from the shade, and hit Spikezilla with a mare-grenade!

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Judging by his name, I'd say he and I are the same. You're writing a Godzilla story, add Meganula, and expect Big G's fans not to
notice?

ALL HAIL GOJIRA! KING OF MONSTERS!
th00.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2012/191/f/d/godzilla_returns_in_color_by_virus_91-d56qaym.jpg

Also, Gidorah had best be in this. or else Me and Big G won't be pleased
roberthood.net/blog/wp-content/uploads/2008/04/godzilla60s.jpg

But whatever direction you take this story, just remember
i692.photobucket.com/albums/vv285/8bitconcept/Demotivational%20Posters/godzilla_more_badass_than_you.jpg

3544596 Spikezilla got pissed and began to attack

but didn't expect to be blocked by Shaq.

Man I gotta say, this story is exactly what I'm looking for in literature :yay:
Although there was some grammar and spelling and such that made me go :twilightoops:
It was overall entertaining, please continue :twilightsmile:
If you're having trouble with storyline and all I can help if need be :pinkiehappy:

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Why thank you sir, it would be my honor.:pinkiehappy:

I am glad that I don't have any plans to put Zecora into my story. Rhyming couplets are BLECH.

Needs a little work, mainly a little bit of explanation for the events going on. Like how a certain human shows up in Equestria, and how Spike's egg ended up Equestria. Things like that.
But overall, I think it's pretty good.

3908526 Well the human part is explained later in the story so mystery there. :twilightsmile:

On the Spike thing, haven't u read the first chapter ... or prologue to this story?:facehoof: It says that before the Equestrian era or even the reign of ponykind, there were us humans and monsters so Spike is actually really old and was actually dead in that egg until Twilight used her magic, that magic flew through his veins and gave him life and changed his color to purple and green ... and later a mustache, like so:moustache:

Yeah a new chapter:pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp: looking great so far keep up the good work.:heart:

3967219 did you see the bit about you bro? :rainbowhuh:

Also thanks:pinkiehappy:

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Yes, and while it was very nice, it did not make me cry like u said.

3967228 :twilightangry2: It should've. Also thanks for the help broski it really ... helps lololol have a mustache :moustache:

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:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:
Now that made me cry through laughter!
(P.S. Was not expecting the stache :moustache:)

Interesting. Most interesting.

At first I was like :rainbowderp:, but then I was like :rainbowlaugh:
I just found this chapter to be funny for some reason.

DON'T BUT A YOUTUBE VID YOUR STORY!!! PLEASE!!!:raritydespair: everytime I see somebody do that the story gets taken down.:fluttercry:


sorry for the caps:fluttershysad:

Now that's a pretty awesome story so far:rainbowdetermined2:, while I'm sorry to see the story is on hiatus, I understand the reasoning behind that and hope that the goddess (Is it a goddess? I dunno:derpytongue2:) of creativity blesses you to continue this masterpiece story.download
BTW, love the new art, some great genius must have come up with that!::pinkiehappy:

Spike’s birthday pretty much confirmed his possible kaiju parentage. Hope he learns the Atomic Breath.

Now that I think about it, Spike could be Goji Senior’s child or Goji Junior’s. Wait, they’re both male and can they even lay eggs?

Comment posted by Just A Guy Browsing deleted Sep 7th, 2021
Comment posted by Just A Guy Browsing deleted Sep 6th, 2019

If you need rhymes that will be of use, just go read some Dr. Seuss.

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