Chapter 4 is here!

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All abord the rape-train!

... I regret nothing!

Also, chapter 5 is probably gonna be the last chapter, so there's that too.

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Nice to see you're back, mate! And with a nice, long update too (no homo)? *le gasp* AWESOME!!! One thing though (so far, at least)

Babs gave Diamond a cruel grin as her cock slowly grew out of its sheet.

It's sheath, not sheet.

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Thanks for pointing it out!

If you find any more please do tell me.

What's that? Did I proof-read it before publishing it? Fuck no, that's what you're here for.

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Finished reading, and found no more grammatical errors to speak of. (On a completely unrelated note, I came everywhere...and it was glorious. Also, I'm now prema-banned from McDonald's )

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I hope they thanked you for the extra "frosting" first.

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If you know what I mean.

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You, good sir, are a joy and a delight.

Babs should totally rape Spike...

before she finally buried her face in her hooves and cried.

that;s right, cry you sick fuck! i felt bad for you at the beginning, but now your nothing more than a sick rapist who deserves nothing but pain, misery, and loneliness with the knowledge that everypony who you care about hates you and what you are! you think your cousin would ever willingly even look at you now?! no! she'd spit on you and curse your name for what you did to her real friends and family!

5477282 you have problems

Babs groaned and snorted as she slowly pushed more and more of her thick shaft up the clenching hole.

Taking a left turn in the hallway she continued forward until she arrived at the third door on her left.

move down a line.
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“What ya’ll talkin’ about mah cousin for?”

y'all
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There’s not many who’s able to apply such strong magic to an object, or in this case: sperm.

who're
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“I’ll be back in then seconds flat!”

ten
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I… I see you back at the hospital,”

I'll
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She opened her mouth and began to suck on it, making Scootaloo squel in pleasure and writhe on the floor.

squeal
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Wow, I rarely hate Trixie, but this fic wants me to see her suffer in this story. Hopefully Babs doesn't get the bad end of the stick considering the mental conditioning Trixies doing on her.

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Thanks a lot for pointing out the errors! Makes it a lot easier to fix 'em.

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You're welcome .

I sit, and watch time go bye.

Hello DeathBeat
I have been waiting for a long time for a new chapter, is there still hope?

will it continue soon?