I'll be expecting Twilight to catch on and kick Trixie's but as well as beat down babs who is smaller and should be easier to handle. Fluttershy I can understand being over powered, but seriousely it's a little rediculus to have babs be a villlain sue without someone who can stop her and Trixie. maybe have twi reverse trixie's control and have babs rape Trixie in the end.

i honestly don't think i can keep reading this. the whole thing bugs the fuck out of me. unless i can get a promise that that bitch get's whats coming to her in the end, i'm probably going to stop reading this. sorry.

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It's okey. No one's forcing you to read this.

I don't want to spoil anything... All I can say is that in the end the good guys always win.

I love these chapters

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Thank you for pointing that out! I've had some trouble with it since English is not my native language. I'll keep that in mind as I progress with the next chapter and I'll try to keep such faults to a minimum.

Perhaps I should get a proofreader?

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Where's the next chapter!?!?!?

Sweetie Belle screamed at the top of her lungs as the tip of the member slowly inched itself inside of her, straining the muscles and flesh around it.

connect to the line above this one.
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Babs words didn’t comfort Sweetie Belle at all, but just the thought that it would be over made the little filly lose up a tiny bit.

same fix as above.
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She laid on a soft matrass instead of hard wood and a warm blanket covered her little body.

mattress
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Apple Bloom walked over to the other side of the bed, opposite to Rarity, and held her friend’s hoof.

connect to above sentence.
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Three load bangs on the door startled Fluttershy.

loud
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to see her write beneath her in agony and humiliation

writhe
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Ks ... so. Rainbow Dash, Apple Jack, Rarity, and Twilight. Those were the 4 character's in Boast Busters. That would make sense with four. But there are 6 bearers. Technically attacking Sweets hit Rarity hard [-1], and Fluttershy was personal [-1], but why not go for Rarity personally?

“Oh darn it!” said Apple Bloom suddenly. “Ah forgot the equipment back at the farm. Babs, can ya help Sweetie Belle paint the clubhouse while I get the stuff we need?”

Nothing's going to happen here.

Treat her as nothing but your toy to relive you of your sexual desires!”

Sweetie's going to enjoy this.

“I have sealed this room in magic,” continued the voice. “No one can enter or exit. Not even sound.

Good, she's supporting her pawn, making things much easier for Babs.

Sweetie Belle had stopped screaming. Not because it didn’t hurt anymore but because she had lost all hope.

I normally don't read rape, maybe I should change that.

“What… have I become?” Babs whispered to herself. “I just… raped one of my friends…”
“And you will do so again!” boomed a voice behind her and the door flung open.

There are no brakes on the Rape Train. Rape is made out of unicorn happiness.

She laid on a soft matrass instead of hard wood and a warm blanket covered her little body.

Mattress.

The door suddenly opened and her sister, along with Apple Bloom and Applejack, stormed into the room.

Where are her parents? She's not Batman, her parents are alive, even if no-one acknowledges them.

Also… Babs have disappeared.

Also… Babs has disappeared.

to see her write beneath her in agony and humiliation.

writhe

“N-no!” cried Fluttershy embarrassed. “Please, stop! I really don’t want to do this! I’m not ready!”
“But I am as ready as I can be,” said Babs and grinned as her nub began to swell and grow.

Well one of them has their priorities in order.

... and yes, I feel like a total douche bag after writing the Sweetie Belle and Fluttershy scenes. I'm so sorry! *cries*

Don't worry, we all do it.
Question: If she wants to avoid suspicion, can she have Babs rape many other mares?

I have sealed this room in magic?

Too easy.