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Insanity's release has had devastating effects on Equestria.He progresses ever closer to his goal of complete domination. The mane six are down a member and it looks as though Insanity is going to win his prize. A war between the last of the Equestrian's and the minions of the Dark King rages. Can the Elements of Harmony find their lost friend and stand up to a seemingly invincible tyrant?
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hmmm normally the creation of a character more powerful than discord (the show's most powerful character by far) would be a major turn off but...I do love ponies+insanity. Tracking
295702I did that because I thought it would be interesting to create a character that created Discord and would then proceed to try to take over Equestria. And there were no rules about not doing so. So I did it.
295702 I see what your saying but I wanted to something of an origin story while at the same time creating a mega villain of sorts. I know it could be a potential turn off but so far no one has told me that it is so I'm just gonna role with it.
Ok I read it. But you don't need my approval or anyone else's. It's your story and as long as you have fun with it that's all that matters.
Great begging wild stad at the dark twi evil general
298559 What?
305843 i ment wild stab in the dark that twi is evil general sry bad spelling
Awesome chapter. KEEP IT UP.
good show....need moar
Looks like Insanity is gonna go crazy on everyone.
Sorry this took so long to get out there. Life got really busy for me.
Take your time the story is really getting good.
OMG That chapter was violent. AWESOME keep it up dude it just keeps getting better.
387242 Did you expect Insanity to walk up to the Eight and just ask nicely?
Relax I'm not mad at you or nothin. I will admit I might have gone a little overboard but I like how it turned out.
I am particularly confused. You said there was the 5 elements. Those elements have to be Rainbow, AppleJack, Fluttershy, rarity and Pinkie. You have Surprise, sparkler and firefly and I am so confused @.@
>>Superfreak1101 No, but I didn't think THAT would happen.
391616 I know Because that bullcrap with all the name changes to G1 character names for April fools day.
So Intense. Can't wait for the next chapter. Also how many chapters are left?
P.S. I shed a manly tear at the CMC part
405724 Not many. The way its going now it has about two to three left.
405724 Actually. Scratch my first response. This is going to about four more chapters long including a chapter change for the next chapter. So, Elemental Fury is going to come later on.
by the way i just finished the prequel or whatever you want to call it and just the word count of this one made me happy and i havnt even started yet
ps whats with the chapter 1 being released after 2 and 3
heck you asked for critisim so here is one thing you should do grab a thesurace lol i cant spell today
you killed the cmc realy i know it was for the plot but man LOOK AT THIER FACES AND SEE WHAT YOU DID
NOW ATTACK FLUTTERSHY!!!
yay!
wait fluttershy did you just yay him killing the cmc!!!
wow i think the time thing is messed up i dont think i couldve read this in 30 mins and eat dinner
437105 Thanks for the comments first off. I run this through a spell check every time I write a chapter at least twice and chapter 1 was not released after 2-3 The date that it shows is the last time something was modified. I changed something in the first chapter on the date shown. I submitted the story with that chapter attached to it. Also if you could, point out where the spelling mistakes occurred and I will fix them. I dislike misspellings. What do you mean by "the time thing is so messed up"?
Next chapter is gonna be so AWESOME
why must you keep brining the cmc into this you know they are well LOVED LOOK AT THIER FACES AGAIN
i hope your happy(and ye ti keep reading
)
True power comes with CAPS LOCK.
Also Spikes death seemingly served no purpose........lets see if you can do better then Serenity. Because it really looks like you pulling a Serenity. Spike died but i dont foresee the characters doing anything differently or something otherwise plot relevant coming from his death. *Fingers crossed*
-I make all my comments per chapter as if the chapters afterward dont exist yet.
560175 I can't tell if you want me do something with that or not. Which one? Yes or No?
642137
Spike's death or the caps lock?
Since i've read it up to the most recent im pretty sure you cant do anything with spikes death without fumbling around and possibly making the plot convoluted.
Really it's not a big deal....well it is but whatever.
642141 Spoiler- I have references to Spike's death that drive some small events but nothing to big. I hope that's OK. I admit that I might have gone overboard on the caps lock but whatever. 642141>>642141
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well its not going to keep me from reading the story. It was just a pet-peeve of mine. And yes caps lock so much, you could just as easily have bolded his dialogue and explained away as thunderous and laced aether causing a monstrous overlay of tortured voices.
Like this except more evil and crazy.
643039 Yeah I'll just bold it. I admit that I should go back and do that it would make it a lot easier to read that way and not take up so much space.
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My day is complete. I helped someone.
Chapter size inflation....i did the same thing. I'll read this after I finish editing my first chapter.
682097 UM, Thanks I think. Your post is a positive one right?
682679
It's an inside joke to people who know about Aizen from bleach.
I can't really say to much about it without spoiling your story to any would be readers who read comments first.
Basically Aizen (the guy in the images) is analogous to Insanity when he drops that big reveal.
The cakes kids though are how i react to plot turns similar to this.
But i still like it though because i think Insanity is cool.
goddammit why spike i am fine with the princesses but now insanity is going to die (starts calling chuck norris)
682843 I didn't even know about the Bleach thing when I wrote this. I just did it.
only 55 views this confuses us
WE MUST REMEDY THIS
umm how idk though
HAHA SEND HER OFF TO EQUESTRIA DAILY
Pretty sure that's a Haunter. Maybe it's just me
1904330 No your right. I found it and thought it made a good cover picture.
1866092 If I do that, which would be awesome, I have a ton of edits to do before I can send it in. Thanks for the confidence.