• Member Since 26th Sep, 2013
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Whiskey Drops


I'm popping back upand trying to get back into story makin'!

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This story is a sequel to The new pegasus in Ponyville


Hearth’s Warming Eve comes every year and all those years Click has never been able to spend it with no pony but that shortly changes, when he gets to spend it with the mare of his dreams Ditzy
regardless to say that this will be the one Hearth’s Warming Eve that Click nor Ditzy will ever forget, For this night Click will finally have the special somepony in his life same for Ditzy who spends her Hearth’s Warming Eve with Click.
with a bit of funnies from another pair Applejack and rainbow dash talk a lil of their night.

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Comments ( 7 )

There is a lot of things wrong with this:

1. This is an OC X Canon story. Most of us don't like those.

2. The cover image is made with Ponymaker. Why is there so many Ponymaker images for cover art where there is a Group specifically for art!

3. This has one of the worst Self Insert Wish Fufillment OCs I've ever seen! There is no backstory to where this OC came from, or what his personality is.

And 4. This OC is also a Gary Stu.

3352927
Well.....thanks for the...info...
o.o
i know i need alot of work to get better.

and i don't get it Gary stu....ya lost me there xD

as for the ponymaker its kind of all i got and for Click's background as well as his personality i have it .......i just didnt post it here.

thats my bad on that part, plus i 'm not much of a writer since i 'm just starting...........but atleast i can strive too push harder......
writers make this look easy >.>

335302

A Gary Stu is an OC who is perfect in every way.

Also writers make it look easy because they have talent.

3353111

True on the talent part =w=

3353111
oh! >.< almost for got posted a bit of Click in a blog

back to the ponder cave i go o-o

i got one enjoyed this.

3388784

I'm glad some ponies enjoy my small tales ^^

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