I'm popping back upand trying to get back into story makin'!
This story is a sequel to The Best Hearth’s Warming Eve Ever
This story takes place just two weeks after the Winter Wrap Up so Click decides to drop in on Applejack too she if she wants to hang out while Ditzy is away visiting her parents. He insteads foal sits the CMC, Things get a smal bit grim but Clicks a nice fool to stand up to something even if he is scared featherless by it~
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That cover art... o_o so bright
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Just like a parasprite!! ;D
and I like bright things >w>
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Topkek
I guess I'll have to read the story then
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That is up to you OwO
I know some ponies here don't like OC with ponies from the show but eh :3
Your story was cool, It's quite rough around the edges, but it was cool. I saw a lot of awkward sentences where you should'v used a comma or a period. You should really read over your story at least twice before you post it. I enjoyed reading it though, reminds me of in the real world how difficult babysitting can be. Also, I'v skimmed over your other stories and I just wanna point out that there all about your OC. Now, I don't mean to be telling you what to do here, but instead of making them all small, separate stories, you should make it one, big story. But here's something that made me kinda nervous to read your stories in the past. You use pony creator. That's something that'll make people think you're lazy writer and you don't put time and effort into your stories. But other than that, your story was good. Keep trying and don't
lose hope, something the greatest miracles and the best stories are just a few ideas and a couple strokes of ink (Or in this case, a few pushes of buttons) away.
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well I'm sort of a novice I know I'll come back and give the stories a touch up.
The pony creator... I know it isn't the best thing to use but its what i've got.
Ya gotta start some where atleast, though me I have no history of typing a story period to myself I've come a ways from having all my words jumbled up. I know ill get better I just need to type stories cause wasn't there atleast a lil change between each story ya read? I thought there was a tad o-o
I'm not upset of what you say its that kind of feedback i can handle:3
3384326 Oh I saw change alright. You'v improved, and did you seriously read everything I wrote? I mean, reading over it again, I can't even finish it. Also, I know what you mean by the pony creator, On a different website I used it and oh the hate I got. (Btw, what I meant by a idea is just a stroke of ink away was, if you read any of my stories, you'd know my OC was Inkstroke, and I wanted to sound smart so...
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Hey Click here (hands swat armor and riot sheild)
4008719 Click : W-what is this...who are you?!?
Oh.... Where does the time go... Felt like only yesterday I skimmed over this story because I was bored as shit... Best move I ever made... Cause thanks to this story I have a the weirdest, silliest BPF ever XD
4429666 .....Owx.................Yea ;D......x3 I earned my buddy though Click....don't worry Click will come back ;D