Pinkie Pie chokes to death at a pie eating contest. She goes to Limbo, and must play a game in order to return home.
AN: Written for one-shotober.
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TheTobacconist
...can I even call myself this if I quit smoking years ago?
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I think choking on a baked good is how she would like to go.
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Most likely.
No words only laughter
3331697
I'm happy you got a laugh out of it.
"Can I change my rule?" Pinkie asked.
"No," Harvey answered.
There are other lines that are more cleverly worded.
There are other bits more evocative in tone.
But this bit. With Pinkie requesting a rule change and Harvey having the only bit of authority he shows the entire fic, amuses me.
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If it weren't for that the fic would just entirely be about Pinkie owning Harvey. I wanted to avoid that.
poor Death, or Harvey
I hope this gets featured, nice story mate.
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Thank you.
Poor Harvey, I don't think that he can take much more of this.
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Funny.
3331639 Of course, she would come back.
This reminds me of that Animaniacs episode, "Meatballs with Consequences".
Why can't shows be like that anymore?
Ah, that was a fun read. Kudos.
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Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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Parental watchdogs.
that.....was..... SO AWESOME.
It's Review Time!
No, Daddy, No!
Okay, so Spoiler! Pinkie dies. And she challenges Death, I mean Harvey, to Pinkie Ball, which is exactly like Calvin Ball. Only, you know, not. While it didn't nearly cause me to suffocate, this story did amuse me to a degree. Random Tag justified.
Favorite Line:
Rating:
/5
Final Verdict: Twilight Sparkle- 1000 years banishment!
You always do that.
Well... community service?
Okay, that was hilarious. Especially the way Pinkie kept coming back.
But I don't think Twilight would immediately jump to 'shoot Pinkie with magic when she comes back from the dead'. After all, it's Pinkie.
This story is awesome! It portrays Pinkie so well! 10 out of 10! Love the ending!
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Thank you.
If I meet Harvey, I should play Pinkie Ball with him.
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Nah, he knows the rules now. First rule would be 'even if you win, you lose.'
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"Hi Harvey, can we play Pinkie Ball?"
"You're a friend of the pink one, aren't you?"
"I guess."
"Then no."
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Thank you for the review and your generous gift of mustaches. I shall add them to my collection.
So...that's a thing....
Wat
While this is a pretty neat story and I enjoyed it, it needs some serious editing and some spacing between paragraphs. And especially between scenes.
Also, I'm not entirely sure having Twilight getting arrested actually added anything to the story. If anything, it just made me annoyed. Up to that point, though, the story had been pretty amusing.
Pinkie Calvinballed her way back to life. Clever.
Thought Pinkie dying and comedy couldn't go together but here we go. "Harvey" didn't stand a chance.