...can I even call myself this if I quit smoking years ago?
Pinkie Pie is left in charge of Sugar Cube Corner for a week. She knows that she can handle the responsibility, but her friends have their doubts. Pinkie Pie has to do her best to survive her friends' help until the Cakes return from vacation.
AN: Written for one-shotober
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That was great. Really episodic and I loved that serious, responsible Pinkie Pie was still Pinkie Pie. Loved the inside Pinkie's head sequences. I didn't understand the point of Discord at the end. Those two last scenes felt disjointed.
Otherwise great.
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Discord knew three things about the situation. Pinkie Pie's employers were gone. Pinkie's friends were not being respectful towards her job. Pinkie was sad and tired because of it.
If you were Discord, how would you fix that problem?
Thanks for the comment, I'm glad you liked it.
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Right but I didn't see him bring the Cakes back. He just took them somewhere then the next scene is Pinkie's friends apologizing. My question is: how did you go from that scene to the end? Discord didn't appear to fix anything.
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Fair point. I nixed that part because it made the way Twilight, Applejack, and Dash apologize seem redundant. Like I was writing the same scene twice, y'know? I also thought it made the apology seem less genuine. If I can think of a better way to have that scene I'll add it.
A thousand times no and one undecided
but you did if wonderfully 
getting into the mind of Pinkie is a dangerous one
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Thank you very much.
uh, so It may just be because I'm reading all your oneshotober stuff but you seem to b spawning plot bunnies a lot...Was this jus cuz it's hard to write a new fic everyday or do you normally write like this?
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Little from column A, little from column B.
Um? What did Discord do with the Cakes?
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Terrible, terrible things.
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WWWWWWOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Not really. He just is never allowing them to take a vacation again.