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CrutioAstarothChaos


Amateur writer and enthusiastic reader. I have been writing poems and novels both Hungarian and English. I recently tried my best to write some fanfics. May post some of those.

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In Canterlot, life is good for everypony. They are well protected from monsters, the city is a booming cultural and economical center of Equestria.
Life here should be perfect.
But every now and then somepony decides they don’t want their lives. That’s when I come into the picture. After I’m done with you, you won’t remember anything at all. There is nopony, who would remember me.
My name is Amnesia.
And I’m a changeling.



Cover art by Fantos.
Pre-read by Kelly Twisted.

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 17 )

You're intrested in changelings? Cool, I like your stories. Even though I didn't read them, they have awesome descriptions that are surely going to get you many views! :D:yay:

Moar!

That is one of better ideas i hope you won't fuck it up. You can make soo good story with it.

3301029 <-- this guy said it first and better than I could.

YAY update!
Very nice chapter but it was almost exactly what I expected when I read the title.

On the darker side, I'm gonna spend a bit more time with her now, than with my fanfictions. Sorry about that.

Don't be sorry for living your life. Go out have fun, then go home and have "fun".:raritywink:

Nice, sad it ended but I liked how its stuck to one thing, that everybody are weak in some way or another.

A minor nitpick, but it occurs to me that Neon Lights heard about three sentences from her before concluding that she was selfish and manipulative. We know that, but how'd he know that - asking for a couch is selfish and manipulative? That seems like way too little data for him to go on.

Then again, he did say that's what he expected, so I guess he may have arrived at that conclusion because he had some pre-conceived notions.

Really enjoyed this fic, though it could use a bit of polishing here and there. Pretty good for how short it is, great job!

Loved it! Everything came together perfectly and that ending line; wonderful! Good show, bro!

this chapter reminded me of a story called "a change in fashion", about a Changeling who tries to become a fashion model. she also makes friends with Coco Pommel.

Beautiful story. Especially the ending, that was the most beautiful part.

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