Introverted Emotions

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Gabriel LaVedier

Gabriel LaVedier #1 · Feb 28th, 2012 · 2 · ·

Huzzah! A Flarity story! I welcome this little addition to a sadly small collection.

clap2times

clap2times #2 · Feb 28th, 2012 · · 1 ·

I'm not gonna read cause I'm not a fan of "mature" stories, but if I was I'm sure I'd like it.
I'm just here to say:

Introvert, Extrovert, doesn't matter.

Sorry I had to

paxtofettel

paxtofettel #3 · Feb 28th, 2012 · 1 · ·

270014

Well, it's not as bad as some of the other stuff this fandom puts out.

clap2times

clap2times #4 · Feb 29th, 2012 · · ·

270718
true dat

"balloons" anypony?

paxtofettel

paxtofettel #5 · Feb 29th, 2012 · · ·

273127

Or "Luna's Magic Wand". *shudders*

Cheezy805

Cheezy805 #6 · Feb 29th, 2012 · · ·

I think I have developing an attraction to you. Wut?
"she's just too precious," should be in italics to show it's a thought.
Your English skills make me disappoint.
((All your base are belong to us))
Those are the only things I could find wrong with it.
Don't worry, all of us writers mess up now and then.
Maybe add in more detail on their body types? I mean, calling them "angelic" and "divine" is fine, but I have no idea what they actually looked like. All I know is that Fluttershy has small nipples. No other body info was given (excluding her having a "petite" form).
It was still a decent read, though :3

paxtofettel

paxtofettel #7 · Feb 29th, 2012 · · ·

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Ach, how the hell did that happen?

Fixed it.

Atheron

Atheron #8 · Mar 1st, 2012 · · ·

273127

Can I have a balloon please?

clap2times

clap2times #9 · Mar 1st, 2012 · · ·

276209

No, "balloons" is a fucked up story on fimfiction. Never read it. Worse than... anything else (except maybe flim flam flatulence, another story by the same author.

Atheron