(Battleships are Magic - Connection)
The link that joins the two worlds has been active for a while. Everypony has gotten used to the idea. However, things change when illegal portals begin appearing. What happens when organized crime gets involved?
A farm pony and a former SEAL with a sweet tooth work together to get to the bottom of things.
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This has potential
keep up the great work man
Way to get back on that horse, man.
Good. I like where this is going...
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It says something about my TV habits when I read that in Quagmire's voice
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Giggity.
I still see nothing wrong on my end. You sure you need a prereader? It looks like you've got no problems at all with this story so far.
Oh boy...
Shit is getting real...
lol right next to each other! Applejack. Daniels
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Yay part 3 of unlimited stories.
Feels cool that ponies and humans are working with each other. And the most surprising thing is that the humans actually SHARED telephones! Relations are looking bright! Still, they are probably pretty confused because we are like, at least 300 years ahead of them xD
I have a couple of idea fics: The first one revolves around Lyra and her drive to learn more about humans. And the second revolves around Fluttershy learning more about how to care for animals from humans.
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I just got a mental image of Fluttershy in a vet's office spaying and neutering pets.
the plot is interesting so far. but i must admit that the fic is getting a bit dark, but considering the topic of crime, i guess it could pass. I loved how it started out in an expedition to the possibility of opening doors to a new world. this one seems a bit a mute. i guess crime-fighting never lives up to full scale wars and out of the world diplomacy
. hopefully, the next few chapters will be more exciting. i have to note though that the involvement of one of the mane six is a bit disappointing. in fact, a lot of the characters that we knew and love in the previous story have little to no involvement. perhaps if some familiar faces would get involved in the story once more, that would be swell. perhaps you could make a scene where mittal, the president, the princesses and the mane six to celebrate the second anniversary of the opening of the portals. we should also see a lot more ponies in the human world. i still look forward to reading your story. i'm still curious to what happened to oswald.
AppleJack Daniels.... so that's how it was made
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you still did a great job on the chapter
even with the problems that you had before, I can't wait for more
Car 1337 I get it!
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CPD cars use 4-digit codes. I couldn't pass up an opportunity like that.
On Hiatus?
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That means I'm updating less than once a day, lol
Err. No, On Hiatus means to not be updating for an indefinite period of time, usually months or even years but mostly never.
"On Hiatus" is how fanfics die.
Which is why I'm confused.
Bravo!
Please do not mention 'that' fanfic ever again.
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huh?
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Cupcakes by Seargent Sprinkles.
Awesome!
Nice ending, and nice to see AJ get herself a stallion. It's always sunny in Fillydelphia, after all.
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Your cupcakes will be given to you by a sergeant. they will have sprinkles
He means you referenced Cupcakes by naming that one guy Sergeant Sprinkles.
332165 Yes, donuts are always a good ending.
Oh shii-
Car 1337
I c wat u did thar
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I love this pic... I love it so very, very much. =3
wait a second just wait a second if a total of Seven years have past form the first fic that makes Applebloom, Scoots and Sweetie Bell like 17 or 18 and still blank.
Love It!!!!!
Ch. 2:
What a shame about Mustache- I mean, Flam. Those two had no idea just how shady human business gets...
Constant Clock is a great example of a good OC. His talent is related to his mark, but his career utilizes that talent in a unique way.
Ch. 8:
That hydra deserves an honorary deputization. Let's send Caramel to tell the hydra the good news.
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That's what I was thinking!
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Well, Applejack isn't exactly a Navy SEAL. Remember that this whole society just doesn't view things as cynically as we do.
Things are getting interesting...
Wait, what is Lemon's gender?
3222202 I reread it and decided you were probably confused by this paragraph:
Lemon was not bad at anything, and could serve as assistant to either Applejack or Paper. At the moment, he was speaking to her on the bureaucratic principles of filing expense reports.
Paper Pusher is a stallion, Lemon Slice is a mare. I screwed up the subject of this paragraph, though, and cast that into doubt.
This should be "lose."
I don't understand the 1337 reference.
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