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Applejack has taken a job on Earth, and agrees to host the Crusaders for a visit. When an emergency comes up, the fillies are left to take care of themselves.

A comedy.

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Comments ( 122 )

Oh god North Carolina? I hope they are prepared for hill billy trailer parks and ghettos!

Woah, CMCs on earth. This is going to be interesting. :moustache:

440170 Yea, I don't know if you've ever been out here. But, that is such a common misconception it hurts. Seriously. Thats like saying California is only filled with party animals, gay people and druggies.

440179 I lived there for awhile. Twas a joke on my part, sorry if sounded like stereotyping. Though, never go to the north east part of the state. The stereotypes are mostly true. :twilightoops:

440182 I live in Wake county, so i'll agree with you there.

a universe where the government isnt torturing and experimenting on interdimentional- pony-aliens? sweet. im getting kinda jealous at all the atention the east coast is receiving. i've read fics of ponies going to new jersey, new york city, and now N carolina. someone should write a fic about ponies showing up in the sonoran desert in Arizona... actually, maybe i'll do that.

440182 Thats where I live ye old asshole:fluttershysad::twilightblush:

Could be worse. They could be in South Carolina.

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I know. Living in South Carolina is a very painful experience.
(Just so you know, I live in SC)

Well say what you want about NC least we've got some good BBQ and all the pork you could ever want... actually that might not be such a selling point for ponies.

440538 THis is true, "Good to live NC!"

hey, what is the terrible thing that happened to applejack?

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In my mind, this story is set in 1995. I had originally written the event to be the Oklahoma City Bombing, but decided to change it. This is supposed to be a comedy, not a tragedy.

I noticed a mistake: She was planning to move back to Equestira as soon as her duty assignment at Lejeune was up.


But anyways, am liking this story.

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Thanks. My spellcheck pretty much breaks when I'm writing pony stories.

I live in NC! Ima read this neow.

440315
Sounds more like Area 51. That could be the basis for a PoE fic.

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This may sound like a stupid question but are you going to have them discover their marks by the time the fic ends?

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so do I just thought you were making fun of us and you it's not that bad out here though im moving north

i'm intrigued...

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Nah, don't want to break canon that hard.
I'm thinking about writing a "CMC all grown up" story, though

This made me think of what it would be like if the CMCs came to my town of Waynesboro. They would probably get tricked into trying dip and cigarettes.

The word is 'sapient' not sentient. An amoeba is technically sentient.

This is the kind of PoE fic that I like; friendly and mutually beneficial contact between two alien races.

Still, a little technical quibble: when referring to a member of the United States Marine Corps, the word "marine" is capitalized.

I'm loving this series your making here. :twilightsmile:

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I didn't want the sailors mentioned in the same sentence to feel left out :twilightsmile:

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Damn squids can suck it up :P

I have trouble following your fics and haven't read this one yet but, wouldn't the CMC's be older by the present day if it was 'present' Equestria in 1991?

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Ehhh, yeah, maybe. There's a reason I didn't put a concrete date on this one.
Granted, maybe that's the reason Applejack was willing to leave them alone.

Mmmm, donuts.

Where in the hell do you get your ideas from?

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I sit in front of my computer and stuff happens, man. I wish I could come up with some idea of how to put that into words.

It's the magicks!

GIVE ME MOAR DONUTS AND PONIES NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Cutie mark crusader diabetes battlers are go!

Well there's Starbuck's, but I'm not exactly sure if you could consider that competition...

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Well, technically Dunkin' sells more coffee than they do donuts, so Starbucks is closer competition than Krispy Kreme.

Yeah, I sit here doing research on donut shops for the purposes of a fanfic involving young ponies.

Auuuughh!! You just HAD to write about donuts, didnt you, you had to. Argentina has absolutely nothing related to donuts here, and it sucks ass!:fluttershysad:

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I refuse to believe you. I think you have three dartboards. One with ponies, one with military and police branches, and one with U.S states.

.... Oh God. I was just joking, but that actually makes a scary amount of sense.

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Oh my God, I should DO that!

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You know what? You do that, and I'll see if I can't bother a friend of mine who can draw to make a pic of it.

What exactly are AJ and Beth doing? I would guess they're in a secret relationship, but there isn't a Romance tag. Perhaps they are having a gun fight?

"Mmm...Doughnuts." (Homer Simpson Drool)

I have idea.....but I vill not say:trollestia:

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Please note the mention of AJ's stallionfriend in the first chapter.

Also note that I'm known for writing plot twists.

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