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nicksterra


Oct
2nd
2015

Hello, Hello? · 11:12pm Oct 2nd, 2015

Hello?

I plan to rewrite the first chapter before continuing. Most of it is quite contrived, and the scene where they get thrown out of the universe was incredibly rushed.

Don't worry, I will still have the wacky, slightly insane humor, but at the behest of my editor/prereader LateBronyWriter I am rewriting the first chapter into near-coherency.

Now go take your meds.

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Hey, thanks for the watch. It's great to see you're enjoying my writing :twilightsmile:

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Brony on!

This place is so empty...

Why, thanks for stalking me.^///^

Mind the booby traps, though.:pinkiecrazy:

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