• Member Since 11th Dec, 2011
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nicksterra


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Completely rewrote chapter 1.
Try looking again if you hated it the first time.

Or don't i guess...

i need to go lay down.

I quite enjoyed the original. I have downloaded the revision to read at work tonight. I look forward to it, and the next chapter. Keep up the good work. :twilightsmile:

Looking back on this, I can remember the basic outline I was working up.

I can also see some potential in it, since I've been writing more since I stopped working on this. That said, I might rework some of the cosmology to work with my expanded universe.

This can be considered a precursor to my other stuff in a sense, in that the ideas I created for it saw use in the foundation for almost all my other stories.

I don't have much free time lately, but I think I'll see about throwing some time at this in the next month.

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