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Queen reference and a good story!

I read this on another site and I still love it, rereading it.

#3 · Jul 28th, 2011 · · ·

I hope theres a chappter 2 or more involving these 2 lovely characters.

That's just cute, and lovely, and short. Amazing.

:rainbowlaugh: yes, i laughed. i laughed quite a bit.

Thanks for this.

This was really cute. I hope there's more like this...

Yeah, says incomplete. Will there be more?

This was very sweet. I really think it deserves more to the story.

I pray to Celestia that it's flour, anyway...

Amazingly written.

So cute. :yay:

This fanfic has sexy results. creepysmile.jpg

#14 · Jan 4th, 2012 · · ·

I dig the concept, and it certainly has its share of cute moments, but things escalate from "Get out of my house, creep!" to... well, you know, a bit too quickly.

Still, that aside it's pretty solid. No glaring grammatical problems or repetition, and the sentences flow rather well. Me gusta.

Very nice story, I am quickly coming to like Sorian now lol.

I can haz moar? :pinkiesad2:

This is the very first m/m story I read in this fandom, and I still remember it fondly.

Although I do agree with Mogo, Car's change in attitude was a tad fast, but not too detracting from the story.

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Yeah, looking back on it, that's the big thing I would change. This was my first foray into m/m, and I still didn't quite have the hang of it yet.

Dat Queen reference made the story for me.

This story is great so far,

, im having a good time:heart:

Wasn't there a second chapter to this?

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Guess the autor deleted it (and who knows what else) and then left fimfiction. I hate people who create something but the deleting everything when they're leaving a fandom:facehoof:

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