• Published 26th Jul 2013
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Unprofessional - Exelzior



After one of their training sessions, Soarin finds out Spitfire has a thing for him. One thing leads to another, and they become closer friends than Soarin would've ever imagined.

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When does the clop first happen?

Another well-written chapter, I'm loving it:pinkiehappy:
The only problem I've gotten so far is the abrupt ending

Waggling her tail a little, she felt it make contact with something unseen behind her, and a grin spread across her face.

It doesn't have to end this way IMHO and it just feels like they are having sex in every single chapter. Don't get me wrong here, I enjoy clopfics quite much, only that I prefer those which digs deeper and deeper into romantic notion as the story progresses.

Last question, where are Soar's pills?

What are the pills

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All in due time, but if you really must know, ask me over PM. I won't spoil in the comments.

“Yeah you do, I’ve seen you during our bar runs. When you get liquored up you start hitting on just about everything. Remember last year when you started hitting on Celestia’s nephew?”

“I thought he was a girl!” Soarin said defensively.

The point still stands. You'd have better taste going after the princess herself. :rainbowlaugh:

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