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themotleypony
I'm 18, just started college, live in the U.S., and I love mlp and writing, so I figured I would try and do both.
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What was the point of even mentioning rainbow dash? Seriously, it's just off-putting.
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I took care of the RD and thanks for the compliment! It's my first clopfic so I was really hoping that someone would enjoy giving it a read.
SoarinFire smut? INSTANT FAVORITE! Seriously, these characters are under-used. They can be made into such incredible pieces of a story, just like this. Great job!
~SolidFire
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Thanks for the compliment, it's nice to know I did a good job.
You have NO IDEA how many times I have seen these two fuck in the showers. I myself used the 'Spitfire is in heat' cliche, but I twisted a little around it. This story is literally a mime of like, ten others before it.
The writing itself is pretty good, but...
I don't care how loose, or how horny you are, there is no way there would be any sort of delight from that. Even if one does enjoy a hard pounding, the vagina is not meant to be dickpunched silly. Pounding hurts. Even if it feels good, it hurts. All the squealing in delight is really irking me.
All in all, pretty good writing, general errors all around on the minus, and a little unrealistic and way too short.
The idea is fine, but the story you wrote, not so much. Break the mold, man. Break the mold.
P.S. Thank you for not having them in the showers.
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Yeah, this was my first so I was just getting my toes wet so to speak. Anyhow I think everything in clop's probably been done by now.
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Yeah, pretty much. Every clop has been clopped before. I myself was writing an OC/aged-up Sweetie Belle clop fic, but I was forced to stop.
Foreplay is important.
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True, but I figured since Spitfire was in heat she wouldn't want to deal with foreplay, my bad.
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Good point. But! If you intend to write another clopfic (nom), not using the old "in heat" gig, remember: Foreplay is best play. And it is a very good play, indeed.
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Absolutely, I was thinking about doing one with Luna and I think foreplay would fit in there perfectly, thanks for the advice.
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Luna clop?!
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Of course, she is best pony.
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Oh, without a doubt, good sir! Are you a sir?
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I am indeed.
The story is fine and all, but I feel that it's rather rushed for the most part. Things escalated a little too quickly. It's a good story, but the pacing was a little too fast.
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You're right, the main reason why it was rushed was because Spitfire was in heat, and would most likely not want to deal with foreplay. Next fic I'll be sure that foreplay is definitely included.
3231714 Very well then. I'll keep an eye out for it in case it's another SoarinFire one.
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Sorry to disappoint but I'm planning on doing one that involves luna with one of the mane six.
3231738 Calling it now as TwiLuna.
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Actually leaning towards dash right now, I haven't really seen them together so.....
THE RAINBOW DASH
That was a delightful read. I especially enjoyed the "blue ball" comment.
My only response- LOL xD
i liked your diversity of language but personally i think it was a little rushed. But it was a well thought out story.
Won't Rainbow notice the... Smell that's coming off Soarin?
3230570 Yeah, it doesn't really accomplish much except adding moral ambiguity...
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it's a pony colpfic, it's not meant to be taken seriously
3230570 Dash's appearance in a soarinfire story irks me to no end.
Other than that, a really nice story, packs more punch than I expected.