I love what your doing with this story. Please write more

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When I have time and inspiration again, I will.

Ahh.....Memories....

Wow, this is so adorable and cute and sweet and romantic and all kinds of awesome!
And funny too sometimes, "safe and horny".

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Thanks, you're not the only one to point out the funny bit, MidnightDancer reacted to that as well. Don't know why, I never meant for it to be that funny actually.

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It's cause Spitfire was all so cute and cuddly in the sentences before, like totally innocent and just happy to snuggle with Soarin and then BAAM! "I want sex and I'll get my sex".
That stark contrast in such a short sentence after a quite long romantic description is what makes it funny.

Great story!
Its kinda hard to find a good one on the Bolts, but this is definantly one of the good ones

I skipped the sex and found everything on either side to be a great funny read. The crude humor made me laugh quite a bit. I do think Soarin is the type who would need take a few hints. I like them as a couple, they are always seemingly glued together on the show, always at each others side. Its like Spitfires way of making sure no pony else touches the stallion that she wants for keeps.

I found it rather funny how the only other pony in the showers left rather quickly. I think they knew Spitty was going to take another shot at Soarin'

Spitfire smiled, maybe today she’d finally get somewhere with him.

Yep, she's boss mare for a reason

“Well, we have training for the performance at the Coliseum next week. And I’m not gonna go easy on you just because you’re screwing me, I might add,” Spitfire said in a rather stern tone.
Soarin groaned.    

great funny note to end it on
She does have to keep her boyfriend in shape after all. I just think they will get other kinds of training time in there too now.

Oh and final note. I really like how Spitfire transited from cute and cuddly and how she feels so safe in her lovers hooves, to wanting to do Soarin and wanting him so much that nothing was going to stop her.

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Well, if you're not in it for the sex, you might like what I have coming up. I'm currently working on the next chapter, which doesn't involve sex, and most of the upcoming chapters will try and delve deeper into their relationship. Though there will be clop sprinkled in to keep it interesting for those who aren't so interested in wether or not the story goes anywhere.