After one of their training sessions, Soarin finds out Spitfire has a thing for him. One thing leads to another, and they become closer friends than Soarin would've ever imagined.
A million thoughts went through Soarins head over the course of a second. The thought of how wrong it all could go, how the Wonderbolts, Cloudsdale, all of Equestria would react once the news broke that the two of them were an item. It would be the worst storm any of them had ever experienced, ending not only their careers as flyers, but their chances of ever attaining happiness again. Their lives would become a living hell that they’d be carrying to their graves.
I don't quite get why that would be so horrible. Sure they could or would lose their jobs and their image might take a bit of a hurt by some of their fans, but all in all? I think especially their families will be happy that FINALLY Soarin got a steady gf/fiancé and/or that Spitfire found her true love and stops having short-livef affaires. And their friends as well would be happy for them. And I bet'cha there must be dozens, hundreds if not thousands of fans who all already believe that Spitfire and Soarin are together and the Wonderbolts are just keeping it secret and they can't wait for the news. XD
So i fail to see the connection of the horribleness of their relationship gets found out and well, "real life". It's not like both of them are males or females or that there's a superlarge age gap between them or that they belong to different species, etc. Even with the codex honor broken, I doubt they are the fist Wonderbolts who fell in love with each other. Maybe some further explanation here to show why it would be so horrible if they get found out to help make sense?
4062160 Well, the codex will be explained, but it's not the main thing which will mess things up. Basically, this plot point came to me from a comment I got on DA for the cover art of this story, where I was informed that workplace relationships are often illegal. This fact, in combination with their status as celebrities, I figured would become a PR nightmare for them in case it ever gets out.
Also, if you have an idea you want to share, I'm open to suggestions. The reason why this one's coming along at a snails pace on salt is because I don't have a finished script, so any input on your part is welcome if you want to talk. I'll be willing to adopt ideas and give you credit in the description as a contributor.
4802614 Ohhhh, why'd you have to say that? Kidding aside, yes, I REALLY need to be working on this, I just have no idea where to really take it. So far it's becoming more like a lot of vinjettes, rather than one big story.
>>Exelzior hmmm...try to look at other clopfics or just or fic.that should give u some ideas at least but im not in a rush.take your time...and if u would make a date to a new chapter...when would u let it out?...just askin.no need to rush or anything...but i love this story and everyword in it.soarin and spitfire are amazing together...not like RDSR..but when would u plan u show it?
4914265 No, I just have a lot to deal with IRL. I will get going with this eventually, honestly I'm probably on the lookout for another editor/pre-reader if I'm to get it of the ground anytime soon.
4917008 I mean someone who can look over each chapter before it gets posted, to help pick out any mistakes, offer advise on changes, and maybe help a little with editing.
It would be great to see this continued (if your still here) as its a great story! Ive just finished re-reading and I think it stands up well, i just wish there was more to it
“Then we don’t let them onto us,” she said calmingly, “I don’t care if we have to meet in secrecy, I want this, Soarin, more than you can imagine. I’ve been alone for so long now, that up until a few days back, I hardly remembered what it was like to be with somepony,” she said, pulling him into a hug. “But I do understand your worries, and know that I’m not trying to persuade you into doing something you don’t want to do. I’m only asking you, at least for now, to not worry about it. We’ll find a way around it, and if we have to face the consequences some day, then let’s cross that bridge when we come to it.”
Putting off the problems presented in a secret relationship? *flash backs to revenge of the sith*
Hah, what a coincidence, I was just wondering when this was going to get updated earlier today.
I simply cannot express enough how much I'm loving this.
Adorable. Plain ol' adorable.
I don't quite get why that would be so horrible. Sure they could or would lose their jobs and their image might take a bit of a hurt by some of their fans, but all in all? I think especially their families will be happy that FINALLY Soarin got a steady gf/fiancé and/or that Spitfire found her true love and stops having short-livef affaires. And their friends as well would be happy for them. And I bet'cha there must be dozens, hundreds if not thousands of fans who all already believe that Spitfire and Soarin are together and the Wonderbolts are just keeping it secret and they can't wait for the news. XD
So i fail to see the connection of the horribleness of their relationship gets found out and well, "real life". It's not like both of them are males or females or that there's a superlarge age gap between them or that they belong to different species, etc. Even with the codex honor broken, I doubt they are the fist Wonderbolts who fell in love with each other. Maybe some further explanation here to show why it would be so horrible if they get found out to help make sense?
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Well, the codex will be explained, but it's not the main thing which will mess things up.
Basically, this plot point came to me from a comment I got on DA for the cover art of this story, where I was informed that workplace relationships are often illegal. This fact, in combination with their status as celebrities, I figured would become a PR nightmare for them in case it ever gets out.
Also, if you have an idea you want to share, I'm open to suggestions. The reason why this one's coming along at a snails pace on salt is because I don't have a finished script, so any input on your part is welcome if you want to talk. I'll be willing to adopt ideas and give you credit in the description as a contributor.
I just finished it today and i was satisfied.but thats some kinky stuff and i loved it so much and im glad its not complete yet.hope to see more soon.
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Ohhhh, why'd you have to say that?
Kidding aside, yes, I REALLY need to be working on this, I just have no idea where to really take it. So far it's becoming more like a lot of vinjettes, rather than one big story.
>>Exelzior hmmm...try to look at other clopfics or just or fic.that should give u some ideas at least but im not in a rush.take your time...and if u would make a date to a new chapter...when would u let it out?...just askin.no need to rush or anything...but i love this story and everyword in it.soarin and spitfire are amazing together...not like RDSR..but when would u plan u show it?
Ummm...did u forget aboot this story?
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No, I just have a lot to deal with IRL. I will get going with this eventually, honestly I'm probably on the lookout for another editor/pre-reader if I'm to get it of the ground anytime soon.
4914813 ok,take your time comrade.o and what do u mean about pre-reader
4917008
I mean someone who can look over each chapter before it gets posted, to help pick out any mistakes, offer advise on changes, and maybe help a little with editing.
4971522 umm,mind if i take a look at them? if not im totally fine with that.its just im too impatient.
Its been 2 years since I last red this
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And about the same ammount of time since I touched it...I suck.
It would be great to see this continued (if your still here) as its a great story! Ive just finished re-reading and I think it stands up well, i just wish there was more to it
Putting off the problems presented in a secret relationship?
*flash backs to revenge of the sith*