the fun never ends

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wubsy finely gets to live a normal life she wants to live with vinyl and octavia but finds out the good times only last for so long.
Sequel to fun with changlings
editor SolidFire
art by Dotterall

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Crescent Wrench

Crescent Wrench #1 · Jul 30th, 2013 · · ·

I can do a full edit on this tomorrow, if you are willing to wait that long. And no, I haven't read the chapter in depth, just skimmed over it in general

serebii

serebii #2 · Jul 31st, 2013 · · ·

2961393 i can wait

SolidFire

SolidFire #3 · Aug 6th, 2013 · · ·

Vinyl woke to the rays of the rising sun hitting her in the face like a door. Her head was pounding like she'd been hit in the face with a hammer over and over again. Vinyl loved parties, she wished her life could be one big party all the time, but she hated hangovers. She would rather fight changelings than deal with a hangover any day of the week. She looked over to see the two other ponies in her bed still sleeping. She got up slowly, making sure not to wake them, then carefully got out of bed and moved to the kitchen.
That is just the first paragraph. Do you think you could make a G-doc of this story? It would be so much faster and easier for me to edit for you.

SolidFire

SolidFire #4 · Aug 6th, 2013 · · ·

2969593
Oh, I should have replied for the first comment. Anyway, I edited the first paragraph, but I would advise that you make a G-doc of this so that it will be much faster and easier to edit.

serebii

serebii #5 · Aug 6th, 2013 · · ·

3000776 ok ill see what i can do

Slashwing

Slashwing #6 · Aug 24th, 2013 · · ·

hey a took a copy of this for a review if you like a look heres a link
https://www.facebook.com/pages/Slash-wing-my-little-pony-FIM/339895572794546?ref=hl

thesilentpony

thesilentpony #7 · Aug 24th, 2013 · · ·

interesting to say the least!

serebii

serebii #8 · Aug 25th, 2013 · · ·

3095625 i checked the review thank you

SolidFire

SolidFire #9 · Aug 25th, 2013 · · ·

Well, I just noticed that this is up. I wish you the best of luck when completing the later chapters of this. I'm sorry for my rather...abrasive words in the PM.

serebii