War letters.

When a stranger arrives at the castle with news on how the war is going he has trouble looking any pony in the eye. Princess Cadence is having her first filly shower because she is expecting soon. Things go down hill when he walks in on the party.

I got the Idea from listening to "If You're Reading This" by: Tim McGraw
I also know my grammar sucks you all don't have to point that out to me.This was also a very fast story for me.

Now all fixed!!!

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MR scrappy

MR scrappy #1 · Jul 16th, 2013 · · ·

I honestly thought it was pretty good, especially considering the whole "spur of the moment" deal. I know you said to not mind the grammar, but I think that if you put more time into the structure of the story and the grammar, it would've been even better. Good job

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Acespadez1134 #2 · Jul 16th, 2013 · · ·

2882632 Thanks but to be honest I am real rusty with my grammar.I havn't needed to use it for about 7 years now I might have a friend of mine look at it and fix it for me. Thanks for the comment.