• Published 8th Jul 2013
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The Royal Guard - Jacob562



A new Palace Guard finds that life in the Royal Palace can be more stressful than he originally thought

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Chapter XV

The Princesses and Thunder Clop returned to Canterlot the next day. Finally things were getting back to normal. Celestia and Luna were getting along better than anypony could remember. Celestia stay true to her word and quit trying to drive Luna and Thunder Clop apart. She even released a statement to help curb some of the rumors that had been circulating in the tabloids. Luna and Thunder Clop didn't care though, they were together and that's all that mattered to them. They did everything together from that moment onward.

As the days passed into weeks and the weeks passed into months their love for each other grew. Thunder Clop returned home to celebrate Hearth-Warming Eve with his family and Luna accompanied him, much to his parents and their tiny towns shock. He had not notified them and decided it should be a surprise. Of course Thunder Clops parents had read the tabloids, and even the announcement from the Palace, but it was still a surprise to see the Princess of the night standing on their doorstep holding hooves with their son.They had a wonderful visit, Thunder Clop took Luna to his old school and all his favorite spots, even the valley where he camped, though it was covered snow.

After the new year they returned to the Canterlot and the palace. Slowly Luna and Celestia began to give Thunder Clop extra responsibilities. He would find himself included in overseeing parades, rallies and other public appearances with Luna. He was privileged to be present during diplomatic meetings, though he usually only gave Luna his opinion or suggestions in private, so as not to offend the foreign dignitaries. Thunder Clop was extremely pleased when Princess Cadence included him by name in an invitation asking Luna to come to a state visit in the Chrystal Empire.

His relationship with Luna was going as steady as ever, they had their occasional spats, but nothing to ever drive them apart. During the first few months of their "official" relationship became public knowledge they were hounded by paparazzi wherever they went, but lately they seemed to have lost interest, especially with all the other celebrates around Canterlot they could spy on. They frequented the Oasis often and found a few other good night clubs as well. All seemed to be going swimmingly.

Things continued on like this over the next two years. They watched as the dragon called Spike saved the Chrystal Empire from King Sombra, and how Twilight and her friends defeated, and eventually reformed, Discord. Thunder Clop was even there for the coordination of Twilight Sparkle. When he asked Celestia about the ascension spell she explained that she was able to successfully complete it with the combined love of her five friends and herself, which Thunder Clop supposed made sense, he'd never fully grasped the finer points of magic, much to Luna's frustration.

It had been nearly three years since Thunder Clop had joined the Royal Guard. It seemed like any other night when he woke and joined the Princesses for dinner. Thunder Clop had something on his mind, but he wasn't sure about how to go about it. He was in uncharted waters, but there was no protocol for what he was about to do. How exactly does one ask a Princess this? He thought as he sat through diner. By now though he'd learn how to handle strange social situations in stride, he wasn't royalty, but when he was with Luna he was treated close enough and Thunder Clop had learned how to navigate the social stigmas of the upper class ponies well enough.

After dinner Celestia excused herself for the evening and Luna and T.C. took a stroll through the gardens as they normally did. T.C. was restless, he wanted to get Luna someplace more private, and more romantic. He'd been planning this moment for months and everything had to go just right, but there were too many ponies in the Palace. At first he'd thought of taking Luna to the Oasis, and recreating their first date. That might have worked if Luna were a common pony, but wherever they went they attracted too much attention. I can't believe I didn't think of a better place to do this, i guess I'll just ask her later, He thought. Suddenly an idea hit him.

"Luna, want to go to take a trip up to that valley in the mountains? Where Celestia caught us kissing a few years ago?" He asked.

"Why would you want to go there?" Asked Luna.

"Oh, I just feel like stretching my wings," he lied slyly, though Luna believed him. "Besides, it's a beautiful night."

"Well, alright." Relented Luna, "An outing sounds fun!"

They flew thought the cool night air, feeling the wind rush through their manes. It didn't take long to get to the valley and they settled down on the soft grass. They talked and laughed for a short time. After a while they lay down and kissed softly for a bit, but Luna was able to sense something off about Thunder Clop. He seemed tense to her, even nervous, as though he was just meeting her for the first time.

"Is something the matter T.C.?" She asked.

"Well, no, I've just been thinking." Replied Thunder Clop.

"Thinking about what Love?" she asked.

"About us." Said Thunder Clop.

"And what have you been thinking about us?" She replied in a flirty tone.

Thunder Clop sighed and then looked into Luna's beautiful blue eyes.

"Luna," He started, "I love you. More than I've ever loved another pony. I want the rest of my life to be like this, to be happy with you. I want to ask you something, but I'm not sure if I should. You're immortal and I'm well not.... I want to spend the rest of my life with you, I want to marry you Luna, but I'm afraid that it wouldn't work for us."

"I've been thinking about that too." Said Luna, "I want to marry you too Thunder Clop. I don't care if you're just a regular pegasus, we could find a way to make it work. After all Cadence and Shining Armor seem to be able to make it work."

"Would you then?" asked Thunder Clop.

"Of course," replied Luna, "nothing would make me happier."

"Then I have something for you." Reaching into a pocket on his armor. He pulled out a little black box and opened it for Luna. Inside was ring. It was a platinum band weaved in a braid with a purple diamond from the Chrystal Empire.

"Oh T.C!" Exclaimed Luna. "I love it, and I love you!"

She threw herself around Thunder Clop and they kissed passionately as the sun rose behind them.

Comments ( 14 )

Well that's it for my first fan fic. I hope you all enjoyed it. I'd like to thank everyone who read it and everyone who left comments and encouraging words, I have two other ideas spinning around in my head, so I'll try to get those posted too. Once again thank you everyone! :twilightsmile:

Fantastic story, I really enjoyed reading it and it rounded off in a nice ending, good bits of drama, feels and general awesomeness. Great job. :twilightsmile:

3210821 Thank you! I'm really glad you liked it!

my only problem is with the gold band for the ring, gold would clash terribly with Luna's blue fur, silver or platinum would work wonderfully though

3210918 Ohh.... that's a really good point.... I think I'll go back and change that! You're right platinum would be much better! Thank you!

D'aaaaaaawwwwwwww. I hope there wil be a sequel.:pinkiehappy:

3211208 Thanks, Maybe there will be, I'll have to think up a story. :raritywink:

A end to a amazing story, I enjoyed reading this one and it worked out very nicely

An interesting concept, and it is executed fairly well. I like this story.

Though I am afraid what will be keeping me from faving this will be the spelling and grammar issues that are prevalent throughout this story. I recommend that before you post anything else, you find a pre-reader and some form of word processing program with spell-check and run any further stories through both.

I enjoyed this as a nice relatively quick story but you need to take a few more passes reading it out loud to find the grammar mistakes, incorrect words used, and other errors that detract from the piece.

This is on of the best books I have ever read, you should try and make this a real book! And please continue to write more!

5774430 I know. i get that alot! your welcome :) AY! WHAT YOU ASS DOING READING FICS AND COMMENTS IN MATH CLASS!!!

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They have a character tag for the royal guard.

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