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ScousePone


You will always be a loser and that's okay.

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Normal #1 · Jul 2nd, 2013 · · 4 ·

Yay for rape~

Comment posted by RustyBolts deleted May 30th, 2017

well, despite what the down voters say at least i enjoyed it. :pinkiehappy:

2810720 I knew I'd get downvotes on this because it's rape. I wonder if people actually read the story

I hate it when people down-vote a story just because it's rape. I know that feeling all to well...

It's a good story and it's written very well. Def gets a thumbs up from me.

2811112 9 up votes, 11 down votes. Illuminati.

Downvoting because anthro m/f rape.

I'm fine with anthro and rape, but stick m/f in there and it's the same thing as every other rape story, but with anthro.

P.S. I hate straight 'shipping'.

2809789 I like the way you think

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I like the way I think too~

You know what that ended asked for? A revenge chapter. See how he liked bein overpowered. She is friends with one of the most powerful unicorns ever... I'm sure she would think of something.

2811793 I wanted to make the assaulter seem like a complete asshole, so I just used profanity; yeah, I could've done better on that part. In regards to demanding compensation, I have a headcanon that says 95% of Canterlot ponies believe they're entitled to everything and should always get their way.

There is such a thing as too slutty and... shes a unicorn too so why not uss magic?:raritycry:

2814880 His magic was more powerful than hers, so it kinda canceled it out.

Was going alright, the cussing was a little annoying, and then I hit the end.......sigh. Those kind of endings instantly kill a story for me, it makes no fricking sense to put it simply.

So, well written but the ending just killed it for me.

2822491 Rarity's "enjoyment" is her just believing the lie that she was enjoying it. Will she exactly go and mess up on a dress just to be raped? No, because a normal pony wouldn't do that. Rarity just thinks that they will.

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Okay, I guess I could see that happening. It just seemed so.....sudden, since I don't think that kind of mental conditioning could happen so quickly. Granted, I don't know much or anything at all really about that kinda stuff so...whatever really.

I appreciate the bravery of everyone that writes rape stories, and that they don't give into candy-asses that hop onto the oppritunity to act offended like a bitch in heat. So good on ya, ScousePone!

That said, the story wasn't my cup of tea.

2826833 I'll take this as a good compliment then!

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depending on subconscious desires and certain tones in the voice it could actually take mere minutes to condition the mind to just about anything. It's rare for it being so quick but not unheard of.

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Oh, okay. I doubt the noble knows or is trained to do that though.

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he probably just got lucky, pun intended

If I were Rarity I'd have kicked him in the balls and slammed a brick on his head. Bastard

This fic was okay I guess. Grammar and spelling were pretty good.

The only thing that really bothered me was how easy Rarity broke. Like, seriously, you can't just break someone's mind like that! The rape was degrading sure, but it was short and I've read stuff that were way more brutal. The only exceptions in breaking someone's mind that quickly would be in mind control fics. Then again, I've never been raped before so I wouldn't truly know but I just thought a pony like Rarity would be a little stronger than that.

I guess it's just me but I enjoyed reading it nonetheless :)

Well, that was... interesting. Stupid boner, why must you enjoy this?

I admire your courage to actually write something like this. Chances are I probably wouldn't be able to (though, that being said, I probably will later on).

My only real issue is how easily Rarity fell into it. I know there's a chance it would happen (I assume, human/pony psychology is weird) but not that quickly. Then again, everyone else has been saying that, so it's nothing new to hear :twilightsheepish:

Upvoting and favouriting, because of reasons.

3230409 Rarity's actually my least favorite character, so I didn't mind making her fall into it so easily. For all those Rarity lovers out there though...

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